Reviews for Twisted Steel
orochimaru's cherry blossom chapter 2 . 8/30/2013
im really liking this.
Kyrara chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
Well, I guess this story won't go anywhere... but I'll take the first chapter as a very good one-shot. I recently re-watched Sinbad (on VHS! naturally) and felt like in the end the whole relationship between Marina and Sinbad was rushed. I mean, first, she spends a great deal of her time growing up with Proteus, only to leave him behind for a guy she knows less than two weeks? That's... uncharacteristic.
I always tried to explain it away, that because Proteus and Marina grew up together they feel more like Brother/Sister than an engaged couple... But the film doesn't really explain this, sadly.
So, I'll gladly take your take on dutiful Marina staying with her long-time fiancé and only with time realizing her lost possibilities.
Ellen chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
This made me so sad.. It's worth a read.
mythaelogy chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
This is brilliant! I love your writing style, it really tells the story. I also like Marina's backstory. Please continue it, I wanna know where it goes!
Lokey Sparkey chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Nice. Very well done. It was a great adventure.
SnowGooseInTheSunset chapter 2 . 6/14/2012
Could you please include Rat?