Reviews for Sunset Amore REPUBLISHED
RELL'73 chapter 7 . 2/15
PLEASE , write more chapters.
Leo chapter 7 . 1/6
Good story, i would like to know more about these rituals. Especially since they can't have been around for long since Earth is a newcomer (a noob) in intergalactic relations. Also can you clarify, is Viro the purple being with the 'twisted wet rag ears' or is that someone else?
REMEMBEROBAN chapter 7 . 6/8/2012
Keep this going! Can't wait till the next chapter!
REMEMBEROBAN chapter 2 . 6/8/2012
don't understand why people don't read your story! I'm speechless. Aikka's confession was probably my favorite part, ahahah!
REMEMBEROBAN chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Wow! Well done! Got to say that I really liked this chapter. You've managed to keep the length perfectly fine and not to long nor to short. It's a good thing that you keep the language and writing style easy or else it would just be confusing to read it. One thing you could fix is the amount of dialouge. Remember that a story should contain just a FEW dialouges or else it would just look like a script for a movie. Other than that, good job!