Really good,I liked this chapter a lot,poor Loki

If it were THAT easy to warrant a transformation.. Loki would've found out about his heritage waaaaaaaaay back. That bothers me a .. Little.. (Everything else is great)
I would love seeing it's completion.. But..
An update is impossible by now, this fic being 3 years overdue..

Very well written. I and I'm sure many others would also love it if you continued with this, but as it is now three and a half years old and no other stories have been done either, it is doubtful. I love the story and the way you wrote the characters. If you see this and the other reviews please keep writing! We'd all love it if you did. Congrats on an excellent story.

Ihy for not finishing.

oh wow I love this!

... You're about three and a half years late... But please update!

Hey! I'm really enjoying your story, but I just wanted to let you know: there are some typos that make certain lines hard to understand/confusing (e.g. "more friend than foe" instead of "more foe than friend") and I think the story would just be instantly so much better if all those little typos are fixed. They kinda push the reader out of the story, when we suddenly see typos like that.

But! I really like this fic so far :) Thanks for sharing! Onward!

I noticed that you've got quite a few typos and you've switched words around or left them out sometimes (her/him pronouns were often switched, you missed words like "to" and "the" sometimes, Rogers doesn't have a D in it). I don't know if it's just frequent mistakes or not, but as someone with mild dyslexia I can tell you that I often do the exact same mistakes you've done. I get how easy it is to do, lol. It's not like I'm at all pissed, I just wanted to let you know.

Overall, I LOVE this story. It's amazing. I don't know if you ever get on this site anymore, but if you do, PLEASE consider continuing this. It's amazing.

I'm dying this is amazing you can't leave it

Awww... and then you stopped writing? That's really a pity... I definitely enjoyed reading this story, and I would very much like to know how it continues! I'm not really a fan of Sigyn/Loki romance, but so far I didn't even really mind here since the story made up for that in my book... is there any hope that it will get continued?

Shit. Gotta admit, was half expecting this, half not even entertaining the idea that the shade would return. I love the plot, despise the frikking cliffie you've left us on... Argh.

I quite enjoy your writing style, thought there're a few typos and incorrect homophones (or nearly homophones) scattered throughout.

A lot of thought and effort has clearly gone into this, and it's a very enjoyable read. Thanks for taking the time to write and for sharing with us. Can't wait for the next update

Dear DaughterOfStarlight:

Tiny thing: It's spelled "SHIELD". They intervene first, then enforce.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Aacckkkkkk no more? ?

Ansiosa para ler o próximo capitulo *u*

Would have been funny when tony said Loki should wear a dress; if Loki had transformed into a woman and went something like, 'what about now?' And maybe flirted with him.