Reviews for Grapefruits, the Adventure 4: Yet, the Beat Goes On!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
damn girl26 chappies for this one
LadyKatherine29 chapter 26 . 10/26/2012
Damn. Vince really got a nasty surpires when he crossed Harry Potter. Can't say as he didn't have it coming however. hahah. Cammy and Trish hooked up, sounds right. Stephanie leaving Paul for Sephiroth was great. Snake and Otacon final got paying work that doesn't have them being shoot at. Good for them. Matt gets head, but gets humiliation and sheets up the ass. Sounds right. Gordan Ramsay got the cruiserweight belt some air time. Good for him. Gods know wwe has no idea what to do with Lucha or Light weights. At least in one world they figured it out. Nice epilogue. Unlike the end of Deadly Hallows. This at least ties up some lose ends. I know why she did it. But could we at least have gotten to know if Ubridge lived or died? Again nice job.
BubblyShell22 chapter 26 . 10/26/2012
Oh, man, that was the best ending ever. I'm sad to see this end, but it ended on a good note. Once again, great job on this, Al. You truly are a master at this stuff. Once you hang it up for good, you'll be fondly remembered as one of the best humor writers out there. Good job.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 25 . 10/26/2012
Ah, I love these PPVs. So funny. I loved all of it. You are truly awesome, Al. No one can top you as far as writing this stuff goes. Good job.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 24 . 10/26/2012
Wow. Awesome chapter. Wait, so who won? Ah, I guess I'll find out in the last chapter. You had the Stooges down perfectly, and I knew it was Gordon's voice. I just knew it. Good job as always, Al.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 23 . 10/26/2012
Man, Snake was really pushing it there, but at least they have the extra magazine with them. Good job on this, Al. I can't wait to see what happens next.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 22 . 10/26/2012
Awesome job on this. Ah, bootleg pregnancy tests, eh? Yeah, that can get you some money for sure. I also liked Harry's save over Trips. That was close. As for that voice, I'm going to guess that it's Gordon. Now, I have to keep on reading. See ya.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 21 . 10/12/2012
Oooh, looks like Hulk's plan is going to lose some steam, if you catch my drift. Nice one as always, Al. I'm off to read more.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 20 . 10/12/2012
Awesome job on this, Al. I had a feeling it was Gordon Ramsay in there. That was great. I'm off to read more.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
LadyKatherine29 chapter 25 . 10/10/2012
I laughed myself silly. I started reading this at work. This got me back in the races so to speak. Good pick me up. Things played out diffrently than I thought. But hey it was all fun. Poor Eddie. Least HBK made the save even if it was with Harry Potter. Have to say rather classy to have them literal fly down the aisle. That was pretty cool. It also seems as if you need a snack. lol. That and your thing for Molly and Nidia seems to be back. Can't blame you. Lets face it we all get invested into at least a few wrestlers. Thats how most people start out writing fanfic. The good ones evole into more depthful fic. Than rather the self insert with no balance. Or too much angst and not enough realizm. I think you have a great future ahead of you on that front. I'm certain you can do serious romance fic. Or what ever else you want. Hats off this was a fun read. Liked how you brought back some managers too. Gordan Rasmey as a heel manager was epic.
KawaiiLollipop chapter 24 . 10/9/2012
Dude...I have read EVERY chapter of this and I have officaly laughed my ass off.

Lol...you're nucking futz, dude.
LadyKatherine29 chapter 24 . 10/7/2012
Yes! Vince lost a crystal vase! Epic. Gordan Ramsey making food on the roof was sweet. Got to give it to that guy. He makes what looks to be good food. Even if he's a prick. Razors Edge on the mannequin was unexpected, but rather funny. Wonder who busted it. Go them. If they don't work for him, he can't make them do anything. haha. I hope Vince gets pwn either way. hahah. Things ended a little diffrent than I would have thought. But still very cool fight to the finish line. Kind of too bad there was no summoning fight. That would have been good. But over all I have to say you did a good job. Paul pinning his own bus...damn. That man is mental deranged. Nice nod to Mr. Monsoon. I look forward to seeing who won and who gets owned. Hopping nwo gets owned hard. hahah. Still a very fun read.
LadyKatherine29 chapter 23 . 10/6/2012
Hahahah! Go Eddie Trish Chavo and company. Way to take it to those nwo tools. The race is on now. Latino Heat and company are in the air and on the move. Hogan and his clowns are going to try and out cheat them. Yeah right. hahahah! Nice movement of the plot. Trish and her ideas save the day again. Eddie's right the airport will surly love a free extra plane. Now if only Scobby was rabid. He could now rip the nwo into pieces. Snakes got no bullets. At any rate excellent short update. Plots good, flows good. Everything a good humor/crack fic needs. I'm going to tweet this to my minons on twitter. See if I can't get you a few more reviews.
LadyKatherine29 chapter 22 . 9/25/2012
Bwhahahaahhahaha! Go Team Exterme and company. I hope they kick some butt and win it all. They have a good chance now that. Mystery person has taken up HHH and Sephiroth's attentions. Gordon Ramsay is slightly crazy in my opinon. He's also an ass. From the sounds of it the place with the porn and boze. Could also double as a place to get stuff for dinner. Nice. Maybe Trips and Sephiroth will get thrown out into the alley. Looks like things are picking up fast. Going to be a fun ride to the end. Still so many things that could happen. Thank you for updating like mad too. To be honest my day at work wasn't going so well. This helped prek me right up with a smile.
LadyKatherine29 chapter 21 . 9/22/2012
Way to go Trish, Eddie, and Chavo! Way to stick it to Hulk and his cronnies. Got to say they tried, but the nwo is going to fail big time. hahahah. Never cross Trish, and Los G's. Also way to go with the extra porn and bottle of boze. Thats the most epic idea I've seen a team do. That and great move to have those tools, not go buy there own porn and bottle. hahahah. Epic. Plots good. Flows good. Can't wait to see Hogan and companys faces, when they realize they have been had. Lol! Compleaty great stuff.
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