Reviews for Crimson Eyed God
Hypnosis Writer chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
um...there is a story where sasuke goes back in time.
Mystolon chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
More inconsistencies and inaccuracies that i'm having problems with

What the hell where you thinking? it's bad enougth that you're giving one of the Uzumaki swords to Nawaki after everything he did too Naruto. But you thought it was okay for him to be given Kushina's sword? an heirloom that should be passed on towards her real son

What kind of writing is that!

He shouldn't have been able to break through the barrier thats all i will say about that

You don't need to have an affinity to use Chakra flow. People use their affinities when using chakra flow because it tends to be the strongest but nowhere is it stated that a shinobi is limited to their affinity when it comes to chakra flow
Mystolon chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
I have a few problems with this chapter

first off there was no explaination on how Naruto acquired Tenzo's blood

Naruto gained the Mokuton But it's weaker because It came from Tenzo that makes no sense at all what so ever, The Mokuton gene is the same in Hashirama as it is in Tenzo. Just because for some reason Tenzo isn't as good with it as Hashirama does not mean that Naruto will be the same

In fact considering Naruto posseses the same powerfull chakra, life force and vitality that the senju had thanks to his Uzumaki heritage, his Mokuton may be as strong or stronger than Hashirama

Why is he having Trouble training his Katon affinity he has all of Madara's memorioes as shown in the first chapter that should include the Knowledge of Katon the Original Madara gained when he original trained in Katon
Mystolon chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
Good Chapter although there where a few inconsistencies

Chidori Sheru (One Thousand Birds Shell). This jutsu makes absolutly no sense It's Raiton Chakra being Flowed around and through the body but it doesn't boost the nervous system (Reflex and reaction speed) instead it acts like Doton Chakra and hardens the body

Naruto has absorbed Madara's Chakra levels yet even with that boost his Chakra levels are only Exceding Jounin level i think you meant Exceding Kage level

Numerous times it is mentioned that Madara is weak physically because of his preteen body but in a world where people can channel chakra to their bodies to increase their physical strength this isn't a real problem at all
erching chapter 5 . 9/21/2012
not bad going in my favorites
lokesh chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
man why don't you continue crimson eyed god and nidiame uchiha madara? those two are awesome stories.
erching chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
my bankai is better
PurplePulsar chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
this chapter was disappointing
dimensiontimetraveler chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
lol pein testing madara/naruto himself? dang. and naruto's joining akatsuki? ugh tsunade should just die. kushina was lenient enough. kushina was prego first.. how dare tsunade take minato away.. isn't tsunade like a generation older than minato? since jiraiya was minato's sensei? ._. ew.. and nawaki n tsunade are just despictable here..minato should've known better.. minato's so weak compared to orochimaru tho..weird.. update soon!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
hmm so because nawaki is jiraiya's student shizuka has to fight nawaki for her hand in marriage...ew... i think you should have madara do something about that
Akira Stridder chapter 5 . 9/11/2012
Not bad story...
jt chapter 5 . 9/9/2012
update soon
McCabeRz chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
He's girlish? .Fuck...
Maleivius chapter 5 . 9/6/2012
Interesting story, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
CEG 1 FAN chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I loved it! PLEASE CONTINUE AND UPDATE FAST AND SOON!
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