|Reviews for Crimson Eyed God|
| Mystolon chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
More inconsistencies and inaccuracies that i'm having problems with
What the hell where you thinking? it's bad enougth that you're giving one of the Uzumaki swords to Nawaki after everything he did too Naruto. But you thought it was okay for him to be given Kushina's sword? an heirloom that should be passed on towards her real son
What kind of writing is that!
He shouldn't have been able to break through the barrier thats all i will say about that
You don't need to have an affinity to use Chakra flow. People use their affinities when using chakra flow because it tends to be the strongest but nowhere is it stated that a shinobi is limited to their affinity when it comes to chakra flow
| Mystolon chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
I have a few problems with this chapter
first off there was no explaination on how Naruto acquired Tenzo's blood
Naruto gained the Mokuton But it's weaker because It came from Tenzo that makes no sense at all what so ever, The Mokuton gene is the same in Hashirama as it is in Tenzo. Just because for some reason Tenzo isn't as good with it as Hashirama does not mean that Naruto will be the same
In fact considering Naruto posseses the same powerfull chakra, life force and vitality that the senju had thanks to his Uzumaki heritage, his Mokuton may be as strong or stronger than Hashirama
Why is he having Trouble training his Katon affinity he has all of Madara's memorioes as shown in the first chapter that should include the Knowledge of Katon the Original Madara gained when he original trained in Katon
| Mystolon chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
Good Chapter although there where a few inconsistencies
Chidori Sheru (One Thousand Birds Shell). This jutsu makes absolutly no sense It's Raiton Chakra being Flowed around and through the body but it doesn't boost the nervous system (Reflex and reaction speed) instead it acts like Doton Chakra and hardens the body
Naruto has absorbed Madara's Chakra levels yet even with that boost his Chakra levels are only Exceding Jounin level i think you meant Exceding Kage level
Numerous times it is mentioned that Madara is weak physically because of his preteen body but in a world where people can channel chakra to their bodies to increase their physical strength this isn't a real problem at all
| erching chapter 5 . 9/21/2012
not bad going in my favorites
| lokesh chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
man why don't you continue crimson eyed god and nidiame uchiha madara? those two are awesome stories.
| erching chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
my bankai is better
| PurplePulsar chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
this chapter was disappointing
| dimensiontimetraveler chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
lol pein testing madara/naruto himself? dang. and naruto's joining akatsuki? ugh tsunade should just die. kushina was lenient enough. kushina was prego first.. how dare tsunade take minato away.. isn't tsunade like a generation older than minato? since jiraiya was minato's sensei? ._. ew.. and nawaki n tsunade are just despictable here..minato should've known better.. minato's so weak compared to orochimaru tho..weird.. update soon!
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
hmm so because nawaki is jiraiya's student shizuka has to fight nawaki for her hand in marriage...ew... i think you should have madara do something about that
| Akira Stridder chapter 5 . 9/11/2012
Not bad story...
| jt chapter 5 . 9/9/2012
| McCabeRz chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
He's girlish? .Fuck...
| Maleivius chapter 5 . 9/6/2012
Interesting story, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
| CEG 1 FAN chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I loved it! PLEASE CONTINUE AND UPDATE FAST AND SOON!
| Rake1810 chapter 3 . 9/5/2012
ASsuming you haven't done it yet, i hope you don't add Zanpakuto's. Bankai would be to powerful and if you powered it down to not unbalance things, it takes away what made it awesome in the first place. Take their attacks if you want, like you already did, but leave out a 10x powerup that is bankai.