Reviews for The Girl Who Jumped
Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
This was such a wonderful and poignant story. I loved it xx
LolaShoes chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Holy wow. This was amazing.
jjuliebee chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Absolutely, utterly stunning. Wonderful. Poignant. Loved it.
yogacat chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
I just started reading and I was already to go to chapter 2. That was a o/s? So much feeling, so much despair and...hope.
I hope she goes.
I hope there's a chapter 2.
Violhaine chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
This isbsuchba sad, beautiful, wonderful story. All the elements of the many misconceptions the people who are closest to us have about who we are. Te choices we take for granted and the loniness of not wanting what everyone else wants in exactly the way they want it. Mindfuck.

Bella fearlessly jumped at eleven and then spent the next decade running from different relationships before setting on being Seth's girl. After all that wandering she came back to what she knows. Sad because the one thing she does know but refuses to admit is that she's settling. Settling by making everyone's life easier, validating their choices and joining the herd. So sad. So many people give into the pressure and choose as their friends and family have chosen knowing it's not what they want. Her final break with Seth was so needed.

Then comes Edward.

The one she chooses but does t know how to go about claiming. That dangerous dance of vulnerability and bravado is so painful to watch. From the very first it was about more than just the sex and they're both scared to admit it.

Loved the emotional intensity of the story and the pacing was pitch perfect for a one shot. Just a fantastic piece of writing. Looking forward to more from you.

Violhaine
karmel kaye chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
This was a cute short story. I'm glad that Bella is taking a chance and not over thinking everything. I think that I would start doubting myself as well if everybody around me was having kids. I think as women we always feel like some day we want to have kids. Bella just needs to focus on being happy with herself and enjoying being with Edward.
Just4ALE chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
This was a beautiful story. Wow. Thank you.
namemeamy chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Love this!
so absurd chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Wow, that was amazing!
Mercyrus chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Good...so good...
Rochelle Allison chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
i
am
speechless.
so so so good.
ECis4Me chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
LOVED this.
BabyBug2020 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
omg just so so soooo good. gah, i can't even
Kitty Bad chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
So perfect.
FFpassion chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
What a beautiful and heart felt story.
Loved it, I was worried Bella was going to let Edward go. I'm so happy she's taking this chance in life and not over thinking things and just living.
I think Edward is the perfect man for Bella.
What a way to get to know each other by travelling the world, love it :)
Thank you for writing and sharing, congrats on the win.
love
Irene
xxxx
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