Reviews for They Can't See Us
hotta chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
This had me literally grinning D
Elidyr Cloudwell chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
I really laughed my lungs out here. :))
(I think this was the first of your works I've actually read.)
Scatter Hyourinmaru chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I love it! Hilarious! :D
myLITTLEnekoSHIRO chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
What you talking about? This is TOTALLY teasing! XD
Cptn. Suz chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Perfect ending to this story. Perfect.
giruveganus chapter 1 . 5/25/2012

I hope you've made a successful recovery from your fever!

Now, onto the review! I didn't find any errors, if you want to know that :P. Yes, everyone needs Urahara! Ohh, how sexy, I like your mind, Renji 8D, hahahaha. Poor Shuu bein' preyed on like that...

The part at the end was so funny :). Well, on the bright side, at least they didn't see all that Renji & Shuu did, bwahahaha!

Well-written, and awesome!
Cuzosu chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
*facepalm* Renji... Shuuhei's gonna kill you for that...

I really feel for Shuuhei in this one. I mean, out-of-sight toy play in public is one thing, but... Renji got carried away and didn't use his brain. :P Oops.

I know I should probably say more, but *yawn* I need to go pass out. Sorry.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more, of whatever you write!

May the words just flow,

xXCoco-HimeXx chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Very very sexy and funny at the same time! I do not have good critiques like some people, but i realy liked the story! :D nice work!