|Reviews for Dragonball Heroes|
| Holly of the Night chapter 19 . 1/20/2014
well that's was unexpected. besides the grammar, which Im a Nazi over, haha, I thought the story was fantastic!
can't wait to read the rest
| Holly of the Night chapter 12 . 1/19/2014
Good chapter, but I can't see Roshi groping Serena. For one thing, she's like, what, 14 still? That's just beyond wrong for an old man to do that. Plus, Roshi wouldn't do that to a young girl. He's only attracted to about eighteen years and older female o
Good way to include the Planet Trade Organization with Cooler's ship.
It wasn't a bad chapter. It stayed faithful to the movie, while incorporating the heroes at the same time. Although I don't get what Nero meant.
Cooler was going to have the others killed too? How did he know that? Cooler had the kids locked up in a cell. For all he knew, Cooler wasn't going to do anything to them. He just had them locked up so they wouldn't cause a ruckus.
| Holly of the Night chapter 9 . 1/19/2014
Oy, I noticed this is a little like the trailer, except you added a ton of stuff. Wow. Good chapter man o
| Tepheris chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
This story is about Future Trunks' team of Saiyans.
After returning to his time Trunks found away to use the time machine to go to other universes. Years passed and Trunks has formed a team of heroes Six Saiyans, three Namekians, three Aliens like Frieza and soon later on in the story three Majins who split from the fat one.
These heroes have trained all their lives under the supervision of Trunks and Akina, another half-blood Saiyan who helps Trunks train the young heroes.
When something upsets the time line Trunks tried to fix and strange monsters begin to appear Trunks has no choice but to send his young student in to find the source of the disturbances in the universe.
Will Trunks young heroes be enough to fix the time line? Or will the new evil destroy the most powerful fighter in the universe?
To see all their pictures search Dragoball Wiki since I can't put up the link. Search Dragonball Heroes go down to where the pictures are and you will see what the heroes all look like.
Dragonball Hero Profiles:
Ultimate Attack: Victory Cannon
Kento has a strong resemblance to Goku but with a much different hair style, he relies on his speed and skills and battle and strangely has a fear of needles…
A.N. he's the one in red.
Ultimate Attack: Mega Flash
Zang is a knowledgeable young man who uses everything around him to his advantage. Zang strongly looks like Andriod 17 but is clearly not an android.
A.N. the one in blue
Ultimate Attack: Berserker Wave
Reyoto is trained in a large variety of alien fighting skills and abilities but he relies on his brute strength and agility to win his battle. He looks like Vegeta but has hair like Raditz and clothes that resembles Broly. Reyoto has no fears known by his teammates but will scold anyone who forgets their manners in his presence.
A.N. The one without a shirt and has long hair.
Ultimate Attack: Violet Beam
Serena is a kind young girl who does not like to fight but only fights when the situation calls for it and shows mercy when she feels it's needed. Serena has a resemblance to Pan but with a different hair style. Serena only fears of bugs with ugly faces…..
A.N. The girl in red
Ultimate Attack: Miracle Disk
May is a very shy young girl but speaks her mind when she feels it is needed. May likes to hang around with her friends but when danger calls she is ready for battle.
A.N. Girl in blue
Ultimate Attack: Black Rose Strike
Naomi is the strongest female Saiyan of her friends but is actually very kind. She and Reyoto will always be seen in an argument but in reality they like each other, although both are too proud to admit it.
A.N. The girl in purple and wearing Saiyan armor
Ultimate Attack: Double Buster
Trunks improved his time machine so that it could cross into other universes and with this he met Akina, a like-minded fellow Half-Saiyan. Trunks trains and teaches the male division of the STF while Akina trains the girl division.
Ultimate Attack: The Angel's Judgment
Personality: Extremely Happy
Akina is the leader of the female division of the STF and is a very bright young woman. Akina meet Trunks when he accidentally hit her with his time machine and the two soon formed an instant friendship when they found a lost base.
A.N. This girl is the one in pink with the brown hair.
Now here are the other six characters in the STF I found them while I was researching and some people will like them.
The first three are Namekians and are only kids too so they're not giant walking green men like Piccolo they're only half that size.
Age: They think he's 16
Ultimate Attack: Mighty Drill
Tsumuri looks identical to Piccolo but was not born evil. Tsumuri prefers quiet and solitude so he rarely seen with any of his comrades but always in a conversation with his twin bother Azumuri. He is usually seen in a large tree in the base Grand Tree either reading a book or rereading one he's read in the Grand Library.
A.N. I didn't see a separate pic with him in his first outfit so he the one in the group shot that says Namekian Avatars and he's the one in the center.
Age: They think he's 16 too
Ultimate Attack: Night Wing Barrage
Azumuri is the very opposite of his twin, even with the face like his he's very fun to be around Azumuri is always willing to do whatever his friends want to do and enjoys the company of others. He's skilled in a rare ki which allows him to use magic in his fight.
A.N. Also in the group shot and the one on the left.
Age: 17 or maybe 18
Ultimate Attack: Hell's Fury
Like Tsumuri, Harker likes to keep to himself but prefers actions instead of words. His past is unknown to anyone but Trunks and Akina.
A.N. Also in the group shot but is not wearing a shirt and is on the right.
The next ones are aliens like Frieza expect they aren't villains, just because three of their kind was evil it doesn't mean all their people are like Frieza, Cooler and King Cold I couldn't find what their alien race were called so I'm calling them Iceins.
/Tepheris's note: I and many others in call then Arcosians
Ultimate Attack: Gravity Sphere
Froze is very intelligent for his age. He's reached his final form making him strong but not as strong as his Saiyan comrades. Froze is actually very kind for his species and may not be as fast as his other Icein friends but he's defiantly the smartest.
A.N. This guy in the the group shot that says Frieza Race Characters and he's the one on top.
Ultimate Attack: Chilling Death Wheel
Chill is the funny one of the STF he loves getting a laugh out of people whether it's intentionally or unintentionally. Though Chill is powerful he never likes to kill unless he has too.
A.N. same as what the last thing said but he's the one on the left.
Ultimate Attack: Icy Needles
Frost lost his ability to speak when he was very young but he never let that stop him from fighting for what he believes in. Frost communicates with his friends by writing everything on a sketchpad Trunks gave him.
A.N. Same thing except he's on the right with the thing on his mouth.
The next heroes I will not introduce till the Majin Buu Saga but I will give you their profiles and background information.
The next three heroes all were born when the STF fighters run into fat Majin Buu and each one of these new heroes were born all good and quickly join the STF knowing their intentions are good.
Ultimate Attack: Mighty Fist
This Majin Buu was born from Buu' small ounce of kindness, Kabra as he named himself dedicated his new life to protect the humans from his former host, Kabra uses strength in his fighting but lacks Bash's speed or Zink's knowledge.
A.N. these guys are in the group shot that says Majin Heroes and Kabra is the one in red.
Ultimate Attack: Majin Death Trap
Personality: The Smarty Pants
Zink was born from Buu's small ounce of intelligences. Zink is very intelligent and is believed to know everything. Zink uses his knowledge in battle to study his enemies fighting skills and to quickly learn their weakness and a fast way to bring them down.
A.N. same as before except he's the one in blue and wearing wizard clothes.
Ultimate Attack: Thrash Attack
Unlike his other two counterparts Bash was born looking like Kid Buu. Bash was born from Buu's determination, Bash uses his speed in battle to get an advantage over his opponents. Though Bash can get aggressive in battle he's actually very kind and enjoys the company of his friends.
A.N. same as last but he's the Kid Buu in black and yellow.
| Tepheris chapter 6 . 6/6/2013
Uhhh, Vegeta doesn't use the Final Flash in the Saiyan Saga, he uses the Galic Gun.
| Tepheris chapter 5 . 6/6/2013
Umm, I don't want to be hurtful if English isn't your native language, but this really could use with some basic proofreading by anyone who has like… a fifth grade education. But as my linguistics teacher would say, a sentence is grammatical if the intended message is understood, and you do manage to communicate the intended message. PM me and I'll even do some of the proofreading for you, since I've got so much time on my hands.
| FireStorm1991 chapter 4 . 6/6/2013
So, the enemy is Chilled, or will the enemy keep changing with every situation (ex. Frieza, Cell...). Anyways, this chapter was filled with a lot of action. I wonder where next chapter will lead.
| FireStorm1991 chapter 3 . 6/6/2013
I like the students :) They're all very adorable XD Only things with this chapter were some misspelled words and missing punctuation usually around quotes, but other than that, the plot is pretty interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes!
| FireStorm1991 chapter 2 . 6/6/2013
I liked that you explained where all the Saiyans came from because I kept asking myself, "Where did all these Saiyans appear from?" XD
| FireStorm1991 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
It's an interesting premise. The only thing is I feel like you don't need to list all the characters like this, but write about them descriptively. Not bad though. Definitely going to keep reading :)
| LucifVegeta chapter 3 . 12/21/2012
Great chapter, AJ. I love how you set up important character relationships before the main plot started. Interesting concept with Frost, I've never read a story on FanFiction where a main character can't speak. Great work!
| LucifVegeta chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Very cool idea, I think this is one of the most creative setups that I have read. Great job with that. I did, however, notice a lot of grammatical issues. Things like run on sentences, misuse of commas and apostrophes, pronoun disagreement, and unparalleled structure. However, those don't really matter because they don't distract from the reading, it's just me being a grammar freak :P. I really like your idea and I can't wait to keep reading! Great work!
| LucifVegeta chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
First off, your picture for the story is incredible. I remember you saying you made it yourself, and it is awesome. I'm not going to leave more of a review for this because it was only an intro, so on to the next chapter, where I will give you more thoughts.
| Greymon Leader Batx flashpoint chapter 19 . 7/30/2012
A perfect ending. This was another fantastic fic.
| Greymon Leader Batx flashpoint chapter 17 . 7/29/2012
Cool seeing hero Buus. Also cool too see Super sayian 3 Trunks.