|Reviews for ThomasAngryBirds' Thomas Remakes and Stories|
| Iscreamer1 chapter 4 . 2/20
I was thinking of you rewriting this chapter to be more in tune with the plot of The Missing Christmas Decorations, but this time featuring Splatter, Dodge, Boco and Dennis.
| D.J. Scales chapter 101 . 1/20
Nice chapter. It was simple and easy to work with. I love it.
| D.J. Scales chapter 1 . 1/20
I like it.
| BNSF1995 chapter 100 . 12/31/2013
THIS is what Thomas and the Magic Railroad should have been like! This! I'm not sure being a generator was a good fate for No. 60, though. I think scrap would have been a more fitting fate. As for Diesel 10, 'Arry and Bert, they should have gotten scrap, too. Diesel 10 was up and ready to kill a teenage girl! That made me lose all sympathy for him. That's when he crossed the Moral Event Horizon. That is what makes a great villain. Another thing I'm unsure about: how did No. 60 intend to accomplish his goals? He had no claw like Diesel 10. Diesel 10 can actually do things to scrap, destroy, and kill. Diesel 10 can do more than run over a person to kill them. He can also drop them into rivers, crush them, and commit very gory fatalities. No. 60 seems unable to do much without a "hand" like Pinchie.
Aside from these nitpicks, this is a great story! My perception of Lady has been changed. In my fanon, she was a Cold War-era experiment in teleportation, a locomotive who could quickly bring large amounts of troops to railways controlled by the Warsaw Pact, or just to Europe in general in the pre-Channel Tunnel era.
I can't wait to see what else you create! And I can't wait to see more Homestar Runner! I want to see the continuing adventures of Homestar Jr., his friends, and the potential revenge of Deep Claw.
| D.J. Scales chapter 100 . 12/31/2013
At long last the 100th book. This was well wroth the wait. Nice job.
| D.J. Scales chapter 99 . 12/31/2013
Nice chapter. I for one loved it. Nice choice on introducing Olivia and Kelly.
| D.J. Scales chapter 98 . 12/30/2013
I actually liked this story. I enjoyed it. Its almost like the Original Episode.
| ctran03931 chapter 97 . 12/28/2013
Honestly, this is a BILLION TIMES BETTER than the original episode for every reason you listed. I'm sure that Wilbert Awdry would be proud of you for taking the episode into your own hands, man. (Sorry Ms. Miller, but you suck with the TV series; you did a little better with the movies but seriously, someone can do way better than you could. Just look at Andrew and what he and the other writers did for season 17 and you'll see)
The concept of railway safety is display exactly as it should've been in the episode. The original is just god-damn terrible, how the hell could Thomas NOT know how his whistle works?! Well done there, dude.
| D.J. Scales chapter 97 . 12/28/2013
Thank you for doing something about Wonky Whistle
| D.J. Scales chapter 96 . 12/24/2013
Nice touch. I love it. Great work.
| MLP FIM fan 2 chapter 40 . 11/12/2013
You did a grand job on this one. Seeing a wide range of characters such as Bear, Rocky, Belle, Norman, Jock (You get the point) is just wonderful here. And great idea to make Bash and Dash into an LNER Y7 and LNER Y8. The liveries suit them too. Ferdinand also has a good livery. I do wonder who this new roller will be though. Perhaps I'd better run through the other stories you already have. Keep up the good work Zack.
| MLP FIM fan 2 chapter 41 . 11/12/2013
Hey mate. I think the story you did is quite good and all, but the name "Rachel" for the lead antagonist really made me cry. See Zack, it's your friend from Deviantart, TobyandMavisforever, (Rachel), and why of all names did you have to pick mine? You weren't trying to put me in a bad light were you? :(
Aside from that, I thought it was quite nice to feature the Ffarquar crew alongside the Arsldale engines. I think I have a good idea of who Locke and the Builleid pacific are, but better no spoil.
| jriddle41 chapter 95 . 10/31/2013
| D.J. Scales chapter 95 . 10/31/2013
Great chapter. I love it. Nice work featuring the Steamworks Crew.
| jriddle41 chapter 94 . 10/26/2013
Whoa. Very suitable since it's almost Halloween.