Reviews for Rehabilitation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is fantastic! Poor Loki though - I want to hug him so badly. Can't wait to see what happens when Thor finds out what they are doing to Loki. |
![]() ![]() Your knowledge of torture alone is impressive. It must have taken a lot of thought. Loving the story thus far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Loki." Odin sighed. "You deserve to suffer for what you have done, and I will not have you sitting even near the throne of Asgard until I can trust you better. My son... this is the only way." He stepped close and put a hand on Loki's neck. It was more physical affection than Loki had had from the Allfather since he was six years old, and the surprise helped unfreeze him enough to speak. Awesome, Odin: the one thing that could have headed off this horrible mess, and you manage to do too little, too late, and without noticing. A parenting, for sure. I love all the "let's see where YOU went wrong" from him as well. Your kid snaps catastrophically and all you can do is assume it was all him? Didn't parent him one little bit, Odin? Actually, come to think of it... no, I guess Odin didn't. And doesn't plan to. This is going to work out well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm saying right now... I'm very disturbing. I looovvee it when a protagonist (Loki can be cosidered one, now, right?) get hurt/in trouble/tortured in some manner. bahaha I really like your story. Most of the stories I read on here are slash of the two brothers and I HATE THAT SO MUCH. It's not right, not with them two. I like how you can still keep them both IC (for the most part). You portray Loki's feelings very well. Keep updating. You have another follower :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() *dies of awesomeness* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly think I should see a doctor. Loki is my favorite character but I have wanted to know who is going to happen in the next chapter. Sorry if my English is terrible, is not my native language. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I just started reading this story and its amazing! I think i hate water now. It was so hard to read escpecially chapter 3 that killed me but i still love this story. Cant wait for the next chapter! Good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Odin's psycological techniques to rehabilitate criminals seem a bit old-style... As the Inquisition. Come on Thor, bring the hammer and save Loki! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like stories that put Loki through the ringer, and I wonder how he would answer in that interrogation scenario if Thor was actually listening. I'm interested to see what comes next for poor Loki, it's hard to watch him suffer, but riveting. Hopefully Thor will be less naive :P |
![]() ![]() This is very good. Thanks so much. Your efforts are really appreciated. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I've been running on 2-3 hours of sleep every night this week." Thank you so much for your sacrifice and generosity. I am loving your story. Though I am genuinely scared for tomorrow. I am going to read the next chapter and not skip on your talents, but it is also because of your talents that I fear. Horrible images are going to be going through my mind tomorrow, hopefully not to the point of being engrained. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i literally squeeled with joy when i saw you just posted this, very well wriiten and You're keeping me excited for more! Take time if you really need to, don't over exert yourself |
![]() ![]() This was so disturbing! And WRONG! And makes me hate water even more than I do now (I know, I'm destined to get kidney stones...)! But it's so ADDICTING. Your way with words is amazing. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is quite fantastic, I like these methods you're using. When I read that there would be torture I didn't think of the water thing, very creative. I'm looking forward to the brain picking! But I hope you don't literally mean picking brains. Otherwise I'm looking forward to it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MoAR PLIS! |