This is fascinating, horrifying, original and twisted.

I can understand Loki's wish for death- had I to choose between my mind and death, my choice would be death. My mind is all that I am- that anyone is, really.

I hope this doesn't sound as though I disapprove of this fic- I've loved reading this first chapter. You write very well and I'm keen to see how this plays out. :)

Oh my gosh! I love it so much already please keep going! :-)

Interesting start I like to read more ;)