|Reviews for Paradise Palace|
| ClareTaylor1983 chapter 115 . 3/6
| KeepTheHeid chapter 115 . 2/26
Okay Noeme, consider me speechless. Your writing just astounds me. There are so many twists and turns its difficult to keep up but it's so worth the effort! I love how this is like a novel, how the plot unravels slowly and how each character develops overtime in a believable way ... you are truly a master of story-telling :D I was absolutely hooked on those last few chapters, your writing has a way of drawing me in and making me believe. I nearly fell off my chair when Carla died! Can't believe you did that btw ...
I'm glad Tony got his (sort of) redemption story cause I've told you before: he's far too good looking to be such a baddie :D
I love you for writing this story.
You have a lot to be proud of :)
| VeronicaConnor chapter 115 . 10/30/2013
I'm getting more and more emotional as this story gets closer to the end... I DON'T WANT IT TO FINISH! You should do a sequel: 'A happy ever after with Liarla' ;)
This story has been the best. It has everything I love... dark, scary supernatural stuff and breathtakingly beautiful love scenes and romance. Heartbreak, horror, it has EVERYTHING. I just love it. And I hope you can drag the ending out for another 100 chapters at least hehe
Brilliant work, lovely!
| CarlaConnorFic chapter 114 . 10/4/2013
Firstly Erm hellooooo how have I not noticed till now you have been updating! Wow iv missed your writing so much especially on this fic! Omg can I just say what an amazing writer you really are I fucking love how ever single time you manage to run out this story in my head as if it is actually happening before me! I love how you write and now carla is dead she's met Antoinette I didn't think this would be possible without it sounding all silly and what not but girl you smashed it it's to perfection and absolutely believable I adore your work as you know I'm a fan and can't wait for another flawless update, thank you for introducing PP into my life, not only is it a brilliant fic but it's a Carla fic and that always makes it better I LOVE it xxx
| VeronicaConnor chapter 114 . 9/19/2013
Thanks for the little shout out - you're most welcome. I love getting sneaky little previews of your work. :)
I have to say you have a really great insight into people's minds, and such a way with words that you make even the most complicated of things easy to understand.
This is such a dark and intriguing fic with rare elements of love and beauty. You just capture people's emotions so well within your writing. As a reader, I get pulled in completely. I am so engrossed that I find myself literally hanging on to every word you write and, as I do when reading books, I have to fight with myself not to skip over parts because I'm always so eager to find out what happens next!
I know I've said this already but this story is one of my favourite stories on here. It really does hold a special place in my heart because I can still remember reading the very first chapter and just being completely blown away. I've been hooked ever since that day and will probably have a good cry when this fic comes to an end.
I know the chances of Carla being alive are very slim but I still hold on to hope that she pulls through eventually and that her and Liam will have their happily ever after, as will their children. I know one thing for sure though and that is... I cannot wait to find out what happens next... SO UPDATE SOON!
| VeronicaConnor chapter 113 . 9/15/2013
I think this has just become my favourite chapter. I'm sure that'll change when you next update though ;)
I'm seriously so in love with your mind and your talent. You are by far one of the most incredible authors on this website and definitely my favourite author when it comes to all the awesome supernatural stuff without a doubt. Simply brilliant. I am completely fascinated with the supernatural world and you make your writing look so effortless and natural it's just perfect. I really wish you'd take up writing for a living because I want to own one of your novels!
Antoinette is a weird one... not how I expected her at all. She's like a very bitter ghost who wants her murder to be avenged (understandably). I thought Frank Foster couldn't be any worse...I have now been proven wrong. This was just- I can't even tell you. I just want to fan girl over this whole update with you it's that brilliant. Oh my
UPDATE SOON! x
| pejo1girl chapter 112 . 9/14/2013
Dear Lord! Please tell me Carla is not really dead, and just having yet another of those surreal visions ? Especially, as she is accompanied by the child, Antony in her dream-like state? This is such a beautifully executed return. Long may it continue. I can't wait for what happens next, or how it will end. Quick put us out of our misery! :)
| madaboutcarla chapter 111 . 6/1/2013
Omg Corie you can't leave this. This has to be one of the most iconic fics on here ;) I can't bare the idea of you ending this but you can't not finish it! :P It's just too amazing!
| Lydia chapter 111 . 3/27/2013
CORIE! WOW! i've finally caught up after months and months ;) this was such an amazing chapter,so intense and powerful. I have to admit it made me cry the way Carla is so weak and Liam feeling so helpless and that flippin' Frank Foster,UGH! but i like seeing this new light to Tony. I'm not sure what more i can say really,every chapter gets better and better! and just bleeeeeer.. you're amazing, I HATE YOU ;)
| TeamCarterxx chapter 111 . 3/11/2013
I haven't reviewed your writing in ages, I feel so guilty. You never ever ever fail to disappoint. You just have a natural talent for writing. No matter what you post, it's always just amazing, captivating...Honestly, your writing is incredible and makes me desperate to read more.
Once again a mind blowing chapter. This really made me tear up, and I felt so sorry for Carla, Liam and the baby here! Updateeeeeee :)
| VeronicaConnor chapter 111 . 3/10/2013
This. Is. Insane.
Frank Foster is one evil, manipulative b*stard. Tony Gordon has some what redeemed himself, ever-so-slightly. But he still deserves to be punished for all his wrong doings, too.
I hope to god that both Carla and baby are okay, and that Liam finally finishes that evil doctor off - for good!
Great chapter, boo!
| Guest chapter 111 . 3/10/2013
Omg what. CARLA IS DEAD?
| massivealikingfan chapter 111 . 3/10/2013
This was so sad :( I can't believe he actually killed her. i hope Liam kills him x
| dipdipdipmyblueship chapter 110 . 2/26/2013
So like the horrible friend that I am I forgot to review this chapter! Now I know what you're going to say, "oh but Cece you gave me a running commentary as you read it,"
Well my gushing on twitter is not good enough!
What a fabulous chapter. So gripping and so suspenseful. Frank is one sick sick bastard. The fact that he's trying to rape her AGAIN and this time in front of a dying Alasdair, and in the full knowledge that she's pregnant...ughhh he just needs to die now.
I don't think Antony ran off...I think you're cooking something up there missus and I can't wait to see what you do with it!
I'm so glad Liam broke through the door, and I love how you portray Carla as such a fighter. Even if she's breaking on the inside she is fighting for her very life and those of her babies and I just adore the way you've written her!
Kudos to you! and can't wait for the next update!
| VeronicaConnor chapter 110 . 2/21/2013
This story has 110 chapters, and every single one of them have been absolutely brilliant to read.
I can't believe the way you've left this chapter, you absolute tease! I hope to god that both Carla and baby will be okay and that that evil Frank Foster burns in hell for what he has done. I wonder where Tony dashed off to, as well? I really thought he'd be the one to kill Foster for raping his daughter. I hope Guilia makes an appearance before the story finishes too. I just want a happy Carla, Liam, Cillian and baby, with Guilia and Peter (he should come back to be friends with the family) and everything will be perfect and I can live to fangirl for another day.. hehe