|Reviews for Shame, Guilt, Absolution|
| HarlowBella chapter 12 . 5/19
Great story! All the heartache and angst was worth the payoff of seeing those two crazy boys finally together
| Uchiha Riddle chapter 12 . 9/23/2013
Mou! When are you gonna write that epilogue!? Seriously, I think after all the depressive frustration you put me through, I need some more light hearted lovin between the two of them. I mean, it was so aggravating reading all that angsty drama and I almost gave up reading half way through and if not for your amazing writing skills, I probably would have. But, I'm glad I didn't. The ending was lovely and I can't wait to see the epilogue. You write beautifully and I enjoyed your other Grimm stories too. I really hope you write more and I'm really grateful that you updated to this point before taking a long break, because if I had read till chapter 11 and had to wait for an update, I think I would have woged. Figuratively speaking. Anyway, eagerly hoping for more and take care. Ciaossu!
| Witchy Willow 2.0 chapter 12 . 6/26/2013
Ah! How I've missed you and this story. Life was happening and I wasn't able to review. That said I also took the time to reread the story and check out the revision.
Onto the review!
Lovely. Just lovely. I cheered for Monroe to rip Deon into piece even if he felt bad about it. Ah and to know he caused the fight - awesome twist. Plus can't we all adore Monroe as a well intentioned stalker/squatter? Well if not I can!
You made me feel bad for Ben! He was always this tough talking shit and to hear him break... He better be in this promised epilogue. I could see him on the bus or something acting totally inappropriate in public with his new beau.
As for your fear about the sex scene - you did fine. I loved the detail and playfulness that you incorporated. I think every author frets sex scenes. The opportunity for awkward is never higher.
All in all wonderful!
| MoonWolf22 chapter 12 . 5/20/2013
This is an amazing story. I loved it and I can wait for the epilogue :)) 3
| D Squirrel chapter 12 . 5/3/2013
I like your happy ending. They both deserved a happy ending. And Monroe would be very bad at raising chickens in the woods. He'd probably just eat them.
| WRATH77 chapter 12 . 5/1/2013
yay, monroe and nick r together again!
i still have no sympathy for deon, he was a douche!
| Elecrom chapter 11 . 4/16/2013
OMG I just love this!
I seriously beg you to finish it please! (Even if the last chapter came 4 months ago and it is not that likely...)
I just have to know the end...
| mi guard chapter 11 . 12/14/2012
"Somewhere in the distance, between black and consciousness, he heard the scream of coyotes in the field, fresh kill on their lips." coyotes? or maybe a wolf?
| Witchy Willow 2.0 chapter 11 . 12/14/2012
Ah! Absolutely worth the wait. I love the push and pull of emotions you've written. Even though I feel nothing for Deon or his hopefully vegetative state you made me see Nick's worry. Absolutely lovely. And yeah I think Monroe was breaking into the house and finished off Deon. But then again you led me there didn't you? Tricky tricky author. I loved Hank's scene at the end. I had to choke back a few tears. Eagerly awaiting the rest!
| WRATH77 chapter 11 . 12/14/2012
wow, aot of stuff happened here! that bitch from hell was evil! i woud have shot her.
well, i have no sympathy for deon, sorry
| mi guard chapter 10 . 10/31/2012
really looking forward to the resolution of this story - hope you update soon
| Twisted-67 chapter 10 . 10/29/2012
I love this! I always try to leave a review on stories I favorite and this is no exception. I am seriously liking Ben though... for an OC, he's one of the best I've seen. Glad that Monroe finally has someone to kick his little doggy arse in gear though. Please hurry and update, I'm so estatic that Monroe's gotten his dog self in gear and can't wait to see some payback on the SOB that Nick's currently dealing with!
| LittleBounce chapter 10 . 10/26/2012
Noooooo please rescue nick or have hm rescue himself, even better, with Monroe to sweep up the pieces! Poor bruised nick :( this is all getting so out of hand for him! I think you did Ben really well... He's a really challenging character but I love it tht Monroe doesn't let him get on top of him... Emotionally speaking, that is. Ben has a potty mouth :) but he's not just all about Ben, so you've done a really good job in balancing him xxxx
| D Squirrel chapter 10 . 10/25/2012
Ben is awesome. Imperfect and annoying and still exactly what Monroe needs.
| BoyyM chapter 10 . 10/24/2012
Great chapter it was fun to see what Ben was like. Glad Monroe is getting closer to talking to Nick. Your story line and characters are developing nicely. I look forward to the next chapter.