|Reviews for EVE Effect|
| bokka501 chapter 8 . 1/22
great crossover looking forward to more
| Nicander chapter 8 . 1/7
Absolutely amazing. I'm a huge fan of the Mass Effect series and have put at least 300 hours into the 3 games. I've also been playing EVE since 2007 and am very familiar with the story and canon. You've done an amazing job taking two very different universes and making them one. A single capsuleer is so much more powerful than anything in the Mass Effect universe but you've shown that they are still human and have weaknesses that can be exploited. I see that you haven't updates this since April of 2013. I hope you still have plans to take this story to completion at what I would assume would be the end of Mass Effect 3 and give our lone capsuleer some sort of resolution. Your an extremely talented writer and I still can't believe I've read the equivalent of a almost 100 pages book in just a few hours.
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
I love it, and I hope that you can update sooner or later. Preferably sooner.
| Mega Mario 6 chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
It is official in my book, the only better eve stories that I can find are ones in which I can shamelessly claim "I was there." What ever you do don't abandon this story, it is ramping up to be amazing. If you ever want to fly with me sometime send me a pm and until then fly safe.
| Mega Mario 6 chapter 8 . 10/3/2013
Now that is how you defeat a hacker, but that was way to close for comfort. Personnally, i would rather be shot full of holes than be in Eve's shoes at that moment, my pulse is still racing. This story has got to be the best eve story on the site and I sincerely hope that it will continue. I would recommend a small change though. When you switch viewpoints place a page break, it's jarring for a reader to be experiencing one head than immediately be looking through another, we can't all be capsuleers. :)
| AnAncientBard chapter 8 . 10/1/2013
| emperorarthur chapter 8 . 9/12/2013
Fun story. I like how you're showing the human element of being a capsuleer and hope that you keep writing it.
While I know that you're playing fast and loose with the rules of eve online. Subcapitals with clone bays, a pilot stupid enough to risk a Tier 3 in Wormhole space without a probe launcher, etc... I have found something where the Mass Effect universe is just better than EVE's.
Actually, compared to most sci-fi stories ME's ships are surprisingly fast in FTL flight.
Running the numbers: The Merlin can do just over 8 Light Years/Day. The Legion can do 4 LY/Day.
Meanwhile, ships in the ME universe can do at least 50 LY/Day.
It's not that important to a crossover fic, but what can I say I'm an EVE Player. Numbers just jump out at me.
Keep up the good work.
| Talon5Krrde chapter 8 . 9/10/2013
This is a very interesting story.
What about Nano tech for an inouno booster?
| Edward95 chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
Good story and like the chapter nice work.
| Madouse chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
I am enjoying this immensely. You are a great storyteller and I look forward to reading more.
| barber477 chapter 8 . 6/15/2013
Freaking-Awesome. Keep going man, plz, its really amazing so far! :)
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/11/2013
Grammar could use a little work, I'm guessing English isn't your first language, regardless it's not that bad, just a few mix ups with there,they're,their and its,it's and a couple of colloquialisms.
That out of the way, the story is good. I'm enjoying it, it's improved drastically since the beginning and this last chapter was definitely the best to date. One thing though, why didn't EVE target the gun of the colossus since her weapon bypasses shielding?
| starwars05 chapter 8 . 4/30/2013
This is good cant wait for more lol
| cakemaster chapter 8 . 4/17/2013
Amazing. Well written and creative this far. The mary sue effect is kinda near unavoidable when mixing these 2 universes but despite that its interesting to read and story makes sense this far atlest. Poor eve getting her head hacked and risking true death must be a new experience for her.
| Eipok chapter 8 . 4/15/2013
Fantastic job introducing serious danger to a character like Eve.