Reviews for That Head Girl
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
Please write another chapter this was great
A guy chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
I really really disliked the beginning because firstly, not all Slytherins are smart; you said smart kids either go to Ravenclaw or Slytherin (I mean look at Crabbe and Goyle!). You also said nobody in Hufflepuffs has held a "big three" job - a quick look at the Hufflepuff page on Pottermore will tell you that a number of very successful Ministers have been Hufflepuffs. Even without the house hate, the intro dragged on too much. The smut, however, was fantastic.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Wow. i have the hardest boner ever
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
nice
Wizard-Wannabee chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
bloody amazing!
Harrypotter213 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Great! Loved it
Hope you write more
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
oké
airhead chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
i love your stories! can you write more beast with remus and sirius and an oc?
DarkIntentions-HPGx2 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
If it had been any other girl (besides Hermione) I would have liked it. I just don't like fics with Lily or Hermione being sluts (unless Hermione with only Harry or Lily with only James) mainly because I really like those two characters.

Besides that, good fic
darkkitten53 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I really like this. Can you do a chapter with them on the quidditch pitch or at the library where they have to be quiet or they get caught? Please continue?can you add some dirty talk in there as well? It could be really epic. :)
demonlordnaruto chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Great story

Here an idea Violet Evan Lily sister with

James, Sirius, Remus

Snape, Violet, Lily

Venom D.
me chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
awesome story
Penny is wise chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Awesome story.
Paladin-kriss chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
That was fun
xxxflobreeziexxx chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
i loved it!
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