Reviews for Revenge served sweetly
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 4 . 7/30
I like it a lot! **
mackennsy chapter 5 . 5/1
I need the newt chapter ! I love your story !
I love your Bella ! Aro need more personality please ! I hope you will keep this story !
Guest chapter 3 . 4/25
*hums* I wonder if Bella marrying into the Shifter's would count as an exception to the "humans can't know about us" rule? The Shifter's know, and the Elder's even if they don't shift and therefore count as humans, so it wouldn't be unusual for a Shifter's spouse to know since they'd need to explain why they can and do shift. Maybe there would be some people who object to her as an "outsider", but she'd still be human and any kids she had would have the potential to be Shifter's one day, so...
Irrelevant to this story, but an idea someone can use in an argument between characters or in-story plotting sessions.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/25
*hums* I wonder how the Rez shifter-curse thing will react to Bella? She'd be happy to respect their insistence on not feeding from humans in the area to be able to stay friends and visit them often, but there was something about how vampires and Shifters smelled to each other... I wonder how much "diet" effects that scent? Do vampires that feed from humans to keep themselves healthy smell different than the ones who feed off animals? It changes their eye color, so...
Oh! When Bella visits the Rez, she could negotiate that feeding from donated-blood doesn't count against the treaty, right? Like blood-bags from a hospital. Though she should probably bring her own- Forks is too small for more than one or two bags disappearing to go unnoticed, or for deliveries from medical companies of similarly larger amounts to not stand out if anyone looks.
The Treaty mentioned "biting a human" not killing them, so both turning a willing/dying human and feeding from a willing donor would count, and make the Elders cranky even if the younger Shifter's like and trust her and would want to make an exception. The Treaty is also with the Cullens, not the Volturi, though, so technically it only applies to them and anyone else is free to ignore it and face the Wolves wrath, and whoever survives it wins...
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25
I like the idea that even if she decides Edward is no good for her she still made good genuine bonds with some of his family because of his introductory interest. Also, much easier to make friends with the Pack when she isn't mooning over Edward- she was much more interesting as herself before she became a moody whiny teenager obsessed with a boy. (Or so I assume, since Jake liked her so much before the Cullen's came back.)
DragonFire Princess chapter 4 . 5/25/2015
Hero Dean chapter 4 . 11/27/2014
aw sweet please update
Guest chapter 4 . 4/29/2014
how big is his dick?
xDeathAngelx chapter 4 . 4/9/2014
More more more
Matharose111612 chapter 4 . 3/3/2014
Sexy! Hope Edward tries to rape Bella, that would make thing intusting!(hope I spelled that right) can't wait till chapter 5!
ashleyhayes173 chapter 4 . 1/21/2014
I heart vamps chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
Please update soon
Guest chapter 4 . 3/30/2013
Good job thanks !
Mia14-15 chapter 4 . 1/26/2013
Crazy awesome!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
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