I think you did a great job on it we'll done.

I think you should use the song kiss me slowly in the fanficten as it is really cute, yet funny, when you can,please and thank you.

This was so entertaining and the interruption was down right hilarious!

Me likey

That was sooo awesome! But i woyld like it if it wher longet but it was still awesome

Awww my feels!

THAT WAS THE MOST ADORABLE, FLUFFY, AND BEAUTIFUL THINGS IVE EVER READ

So...laughing really hard...and...choking...cough cough!...as I write this...choking ha

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that icarly reference tho

well pepperment butler is gumwads butler and i dont think marshal lee has one. but i guess this story would not have worked without one so its cool. also i dont know whitch song would be good for this. im sure you will think of something though. this was really good. plz write another chapter soon!

O0O / KYYAAAAAA

Adorable! Soooo cute! I suggest the song Black Parade by My Chemical Romance, the lyrics aren't very in tune with the story, but the rhythm matches this perfectly! Awww! Soo adorable! :)

Ahhh I feel like I just dove into cotton candy fluff cloud heaven! So freaking cute!

I like your story, it just ended quickly. Maybe try longer ones? Materials great though.

Perfect Two! Use that song but make it seem like its coming from Marshall's side! (cuz yhe song is originally from girl to the guy)
Loved the story! Very fluffy! :3