|Reviews for Vanishing|
| La Kill chapter 6 . 3/10/2013
WaHOO! Go semi-Dark-Willow! That made me grin and laugh.
I also found the Buffy bit amusing. And I hope umm... Otherworld-Willow wakes up and becomes a little Semi-Dark too.
The only problems I might find it the slowness for the Buffy-Otherworld-Willow bits, but I've always liked faster-paces. It why I feel a lot of movies sometimes become boring, but I'm still interested and loving it.
Thanks for the great read, but onto the next chapter where I hope Semi-Dark-Willow steals some more demon powers. Though, one note on that, it didn't seem as clear as it could with her, but fun anyway.
| La Kill chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
Umm... I don't mean to sound rude (loving the story), but Willow just went from badass super-witch to first year at Hogwarts trying to make a deal with Snape. What the... that's just super-inconsistent.
| Demons Of Doom chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
The change from narrative to the character's thoughts is very distracting.
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/24/2012
Why does this not have more comments? This is great! Interesting plot,great writing,luv it.
| HiddenAndC.96 chapter 9 . 6/12/2012
this is an awesome story!