Reviews for Cocoon Within Her Eyes
LemoneTrees chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
Love this. It's so sweet and beautiful, it really rejuvenated me and I thoroughly enjoyed the thoughtful and mature way you portrayed the characters.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
That was very sweet:) so cute!
The Clawed Butterfly chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
yes, it was definitely worth it, Noel. :P

Nice story!
LilacsBloom chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Aw that was so beautiful, I mean really really beautiful...did I mention beautiful? T.T

The characterisation was so well done between them that I really could believe it was them. And I loved how the back story too went into enough to let you know what happened but wasn't too deep that it went on too long.

But wow the beach, very daring lol. But the reasons behind it I could understand too. I'm actually glad you didn't put too much detail into it, sometimes it's just better to be subtle and you pulled it off wonderfully but yesh, it's nice to see a happy ending for them rather than the sad one the game gave.

In all nice job! Short but sweet
emeraldsol chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
This is very good. This is better than the ending in the game! Well done with the story!