|Reviews for A Birthday Heart|
| Tropicallight chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
Oh god Brock's present haha I couldn't stopped my laughing after reading this...
| wellthtwazcool chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Ya kno... aahandmistygettogether day is a day. Heres the date: someday. BETTER FLUNKING BE SOME DAY OR ELSE THE CREATERS OF POKEMON will not see the next day... * evil togepi face *
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Really funny and cute..good job
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Stupid i write better pokeshipping
| jemini294 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Woot! You posted on Ash's birthday. Great jOB! :DDD Loved Brock and Pikachu's present LOL!
| me chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
hey that was pretty cute ] great job. the gift was creative
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
BLAH! Thaat was toooo cute. I loved Brock's "present" to Ash and the whole "Togepi jumping out next"
Nice work as usual!
| Hisa-Ai chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
That was really awesome; I just loved it! You know what, though? AshandMistyFinallyGetTogether Day should TOTALLY be a real day! It should. I would celebrate it, anyway. Now if we could only get Ash and Misty to, as well.. Ah well; maybe next year, hm?
Under normal circumstances, a normal human being would probably be peeved if someone did that to their badges - I personally would be beyond pissed - but since Ash is in love with her, it sort of worked out well. The thing with Brock and Pikachu was amazingly creative; I thought it was funny. And the part with Brock messing with Ash and pretending that he forgot his birthday... I loved it. lol, and Ash is so dense he couldn't even tell that Brock was just screwing with him... Ah, typical Ash. God, I miss these times...
Anyway, good job; I really do love it.
Keep up the good work! And keep writing!
| nyislandersgirl chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Haha, yesss! I'm so glad someone wrote an Ash birthday one shot! I wish more people knew his birthday was May 22nd :P
"He should. It's not fair. I remembered his birthday...well, a day late but who cares. It's the thought that counts."
BEST LINE. Ash is so freaking dense XD I just adore him.
Brock's present to Ash was sooo funny. I wasn't expecting it either! I could totally see Brock doing that, though.
And Misty's present to him was precious...I love the Ash/Misty badge she put on it. So sweet, and so unique! I've never read or thought of anything like that. So it's awesome.
Really nice one shot! Loved it!
| Pokeshipper chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Eh, don't mean to flame, but that was NOT your best work.
| KawaiixCherryxBlossom chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
That was so cute! Loved it!
| Mewsea chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Personally, I'd be angry if someone glued all my badges to a heart-shaped leaf. But that's my opinion. Ha ha. :)
I liked the part where you wrote "Brock somehow squinted, despite the fact that that was his permanent eye-expression." I laughed because it's so true. One time, on one of the episodes, I saw that his eyes actually did open, and I was so freaked out! I was horrified, to say the least! It looked so scary! Did you happen to see that episode, by any chance? D:
And, oh yes, I also liked the part where Pikachu gave Ash a thumbs-up. I've seen Pikachu do this before and I think it's so cute! XD
The ending was pretty cute too - how Brock said that Misty's present really was a lot better than theirs, and how Pikachu just went, "Pika."
Great job. It was a good read despite it being so short.
| Auramaster24 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
This was really cute. Ash and Misty 4ever.