Reviews for The Hive: A Beginning to The Colony
IseemNew chapter 8 . 7/12
It really good I actually hope you update it it's good
Guest chapter 8 . 4/3
Please give new chapter
ArronGenerator Rex chapter 8 . 9/28/2015
Please do more.
Twilight Dance of Chaos chapter 8 . 8/1/2015
Intriguing idea. I have to admit that the idea of using Madara or Obito as one of the... parents... to the Xeromorphs would be so comical.
ZGK1007 chapter 8 . 7/7/2015
Love this so much!
TheMysteriousPerson -0-'-0 chapter 8 . 7/4/2015
Man this is an awsome story you should definitely continue with this honestly the best alien predator cross over I have read so far good grammar, plot and action and the journal entrys are funny so keep them in when you decide to continue this story
Lord Knight Shiren chapter 8 . 6/3/2015
Can't wait for more chapters a great story
SonNamikazeXeno chapter 8 . 5/28/2015
yo, love this story, hope you continue it... can't wait to see it develop
loneonyxwolf chapter 8 . 4/16/2015
I find this oddly adorable and good. Make more please.
KingLoitl chapter 8 . 3/24/2015
lol... an..interesting chapter... lets see how this devolops eh?
Kittens Kat chapter 8 . 1/29/2015
AWESOME STORY! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! THANK YOU!
IrunaLyoko chapter 7 . 1/27/2015
update more
Uzumaki-sama011 chapter 2 . 1/10/2015
Do you really think that Naruto would have any clue what DNA is? Get real
Mullyda D. Falco chapter 8 . 1/6/2015
1st) Its one hell of a FF!
2nd) Was the Xeno-baby ill or it was special?
3rd) AND WHAT THE KOUTAIGOU MEENS GOODDAMNIT ?!
Paradox009 chapter 8 . 10/26/2014
Hi,
First i would like to ask you whether you are still there...you know this story has been on hold for a long time...This is a fantastic story with a great plot as far as i can see with what has been written...I hope you start writing this again and soon...)
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