|Reviews for How To Make Girls Swoon|
| AvidReader2236 chapter 1 . 2/8
I got distracted by the grammatical mistake in the 1st line. It really put me off. :( Your should you're as in "you are." Maybe try and find a beta to look over your work for errors?
| SomehowSlytherin chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
I love number four, lol
Can you possibly make a sequel where Lily finds this list?
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
hilarious and I'm definitely expecting tons of swoonage lol
| Mme bookworm chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Too cute. Like everyone, I loved #4 - you just know that Lily and Remus and playing with him lol
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Oh God! Who doesn't love James Potter? He grew into a wonderful man. I just wish James and Lily could get a book of their own. They deserve it.
| Rrit chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Oh Remus, What are we going to do with you! X)
| Professor McGonagal chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
| TealShootingStar chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Hahahaha :D Love number 4!
| geekchic8428 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
HAhahahahahahahaha. totally cute
| looneyshazza chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
this was so cute!
| MnM-Flurry chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Um... Cute. Funny. Adorable. UTTERLY FREAKING HILARIOUS! Ahhh... James...
| Timey Wimey Nonsense chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Oh my god, this is awesome!
Stupid Remus. PRICELESS! :D
| Fleur Isabelle Delacour chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Haha, I like it! Write more?
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Love it. Completely accurate character representation. Again, LOVE IT.
| Allons-y Lovelies chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Sure they do James, sure they do :-D