Reviews for Darling
Web2theweb1 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
love it
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Great fic because of you i just got a huge idea to write a story not in computer though
rin chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
3 que hermoso
SexyNekoGirl356 chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
That was so AWESOME write more please
she's gone RUN chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this story. Definitely worth my time.

However, I think that this story needed a little more description. Also, I think you need to be a little less straightforward and smooth out some lines. At the library scene, I felt that you needed to put more emphasis on Rin's crush.

Other than that, great job, and continue to improve!
TempDeactivatedAcct1331 chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Wow, this is really good for your first one-shot and fluff! I like the RintoxRinxLen love triangle and the song. To be honest it did seem just a little rushed near the end but it's not really noticeable and it's not something to fret over. Now that I've read this I think I'll start updating my fics as well. XD Thank you for writing this and assuming you're in school in the U.S. have a good summer.

-MxM
dragonroses chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
ahh really cute and wonderful oneshot
yellow02 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
I just realized you wrote this! It was pretty good for your first one-shot, I love fluff so I aprove of this
Anon chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
This was so fluffy!

I just started reading your other story too, Wolf and Bunny, and can't wait for you to update that one. Good luck with school!
Xitlalit123 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
XD I love this with a passion :D