Reviews for His Return
KorrohShipper chapter 2 . 5/11
This is awesome! This is totally one of the best I've seen. Please continue this!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/20
Please update
Aligator chapter 2 . 2/25
Keep going
Kat chapter 2 . 2/1
Please do more!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/9
Awesome ! Please continue! Such a cool plot and twist in the original story line! Really good job!
Skyvlin chapter 2 . 7/25/2014
Soo sad Again! Why are you so dam talented! Plzz update!
ClarisseOlivia chapter 2 . 4/6/2014
Please UPDATE
Dizzy And Dead chapter 2 . 2/12/2014
No, not Sally! *cries*
Shells72 chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
You should have posidens poverty next and maybe Tyson and chrion. Tell us about the letter. You have great something here, continue with it
Leo lover chapter 2 . 1/20/2014
I think leo and hazel are a good match and thalia and nico are an awesome match so can you make that happen! All these sad fanfic are making me wanna cry, good thing I don't cry and I'm a ten year old girl I mean I never cry and never had cried except like you know when your a baby and stuff and the only thing you do is cry oops sorry I have ADHD so I kind of get off topic it sucks when your in school and have ADHD and also have a concussion so u don't do anything borrrring
LordMuffin chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
Very emotional chapter But a very good beginning I can't wait for an update soon :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
Plz hurry and finish
MagicalEspionage chapter 2 . 1/7/2014
This is really good keep on writing. I like how he is still waiting. The words are really powerful
LoneWolf chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
I love it
Nvara chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
sad...good...im hooked...
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