|Reviews for Friends with benefits?|
| www.majestic.unicorn.13 chapter 20 . 7/6
It's amazing, you should write more chapters
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/8
I loved it it's one of the best fanfics that I've read
| Lizzie chapter 21 . 1/13/2016
| summerpoint chapter 21 . 7/29/2015
I really liked this story, and I might be the only one, but I liked Toby too. He seemed like a nice guy with a dickhead brother; too bad he let Conner influence him to try and drug and take advantage of Letty... You are so creative and imaginative, you have so many different ideas about how Dom and Letty get together and I love them all. You could do it on one-shot, two-shots or multiple chapters but they're all different and still true to character. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/7/2014
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/13/2014
So we have established that Dom is a jerk. A few minutes after promising her that he wouldn't cheat, and knowing how insecure she was, he was flirting with girls. There is no way you will convince me that he didn't know that this would hurt Letty. And for him to do it the first night they are out in public as a couple shows that he really doesn't care about Letty, or just doesn't get it.
It is hilarious that you have him thinking that to himself-but he STILL didn't change his behavior. So, is he someone who knows what is wrong and chooses to do it?! that makes him worse than someone who didn't know... as if he thought that having another girl sitting on his lap was ok...not. a. chance. Better still, why wasn't he WITH Letty at the party? She's his girlfriend and you didn't write that they were together at all...
When Vince (VINCE!) has to tell him he's being a dick, you know things are bad... ;-)
And Letty's is (per usual in your stories), letting Dom's behavior dictate her own... She lets herself get drunk and into a potentially horrible situation because he hurts her. Great job letty, maybe next time you can jump off a bridge and hurt yourself when Dom actually cheats! Letty can be written as a strong character, instead of this doormat... And it is exhausting when two women fight over a worthless man. Letty should focus her anger on Dom, the boyfriend, the one who owes her loyalty and who promised he wouldn't cheat. Between Dom and Sarah, dom is the only one who owes Letty any loyalty. Sarah owes Letty nothing! Yet, per usual, Letty is pissed at Sarah instead of Dom...
(I love her in Like a Boy!)
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/13/2014
Dom is so possessive of Letty (and doesn't believe her). He grills Toby on what happened between him and letty, and keeps asking, "so nothing happened". Letty already told him that nothing happened! doesn't he believe her? and if anything did happen, so what? He was having sex with another girl 24 hours ago!
Dom tells Toby that things between him and Letty have to stop?! how about Letty does that for herself? Is she now Dom's possession that he owns her? because that is how he is talking...
And Toby is totally right that Dom is absolutely one of those guys who treats women as whores! I love that he calls him on it. And Dom has the nerve to say "was". Again-24 hours ago he was having sex with a random racer chaser-despite the fact that he has feelings for Letty! Clearly he has no respect for women or sex.
And I know you are going to make Toby (or Connor) some sort of creep who is going to try to hurt letty to make it "ok" that Dom treats her like his own personal toy... sigh.
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/12/2014
So as per usual, Letty can't live without Dom, she can't open her heart to Toby or even get past kissing with Toby, but Dom, well, he can sleep with another girl even though he theoretically likes Letty. Wow! And Letty's fine with it? At least she expressed a concern that Dom (the immature child that he is) will go out and cheat on her with another girl the next time he gets his panties in a bunch. And instead of telling her himself that he won't, he says that Vince would kick his ass, or that she would. How about a heartfelt: "I would never cheat on you" ? And please have that boy checked for STDs before they sleep together (and PLEASE make them wait to sleep together-it's only been 12-16 hours since he slept with another girl-gross!)
| J chapter 21 . 2/19/2014
| Shortcake99 chapter 7 . 6/21/2013
That was hilarious! I could not stop laughing!
| neshasouthport chapter 7 . 9/23/2012
LMFAO that whole THING with everyone waking up was too funny
| Happy's Princess chapter 21 . 8/27/2012
| mac-reye chapter 21 . 8/26/2012
Awwweeeee really good!
| yeahmendes chapter 21 . 8/26/2012
Congratulations! Beautiful story, I loved all the chapters and that "DOM" in particular. He was described by you incredibly well. I loved the sweetness of love as they did ...
You were brilliant, perfect! I loved, loved, loved it! Hugs from your fan
| dandani chapter 21 . 8/26/2012
eu amei tudo, do inicio ao fim.