|Reviews for Taking One More Chance|
| delia cerrano chapter 6 . 5/25/2012
Yikes! It is Tim & Gibbs! Has to be with 2nd POV turning a rpt into 1st POV. But with all the time supposedly passing they will be crippled over with age before they even talk to each other on a personnel level much less anything else. Give thm a push please..no, make a shove.
| delia cerrano chapter 3 . 5/24/2012
Okay still think Gibbs and Tim - has to be! But "shy smile and uncertain look" sound like Tim however "that's who he was back in the day" sounds more like Gibbs. I can't see those two phrases with either Tony or Ziva.
| Lidil chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
I like the idea of it being Gibbs and McGee.
| delia cerrano chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
It's Tim & Gibbs in my mind for sure with Tim being the 2nd POV. I think Tony & Ziva would have more confidence (even if it is partly false confidence on Tony's part).
| Gottahavemyncis chapter 2 . 5/23/2012
This is great! In my mind it's Tim & Gibbs - or maybe Ziva. But it's up to the reader, isn't it?
Can't take advantage...and I'm a disaster,
the second voice is Gibbs & first is Tim. For me anyway.
| delia cerrano chapter 2 . 5/23/2012
Thanks for your comments on my "review". This seems like it is going to be sooo interesting...trying to figure out who is feeling what for whom else.
| delia cerrano chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Ok now I have to know - is it Gibbs & McGee? It could be Tony for Ziva but "failed" doesn't seem the right adjective. There will be more? Soon?
It doesn't say this is a complete ficlet.