Reviews for Unexpected Visitors
Guest chapter 10 . 8/13/2014
OOOHHHH awesome story! Want to know their plans! Please write more chapters! Just beware of tense errors. other than that i really like how you've kept the essence of each character intact! Well done and please keep writing!
Darkverger1 chapter 10 . 8/8/2014
This is a cool story, I feel bad for Black Star and Tsubaki, they were so close to admitting their love. Oh well I"m sure everything will turn out ok.
Setsunaiame chapter 10 . 7/29/2014
Update. Please.
karma1369 chapter 10 . 7/10/2014
anyway KEEP IT UP
karma1369 chapter 6 . 7/5/2014
jeez talk about a cliffhaanger
karma1369 chapter 5 . 7/5/2014
SOMA Im happy now lol
karma1369 chapter 3 . 7/4/2014
karma1369 chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
should've made Liz wake up screaming
but good job though
Dwmalove chapter 10 . 7/4/2014
Klein with a weapon! For some reason if info that funny (\_/')
Personnnn chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
You should continue this I liked it!
RRJToons3 chapter 9 . 12/19/2012
It's hard to read this here because I'm in a risk of just busting out laughing in the mist of dead silence. I'm silly. I can't wait for the next update.
(Nothing else of it to read. So sad...)
RRJToons3 chapter 8 . 12/19/2012
I think that you have both Soul and Maka right on key. I wouldn't have her act any different.
RRJToons3 chapter 7 . 12/19/2012
Aw...everything wiil be okay. As is probably should be by now. Since I come here so late.
I want ice cream...
RRJToons3 chapter 6 . 12/19/2012
Genius! You put Kid in white, the key to his hotness!
RRJToons3 chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
I only got halfway through this chapter. I was so into the story, I didn't even realize it was almost time to leave Cyber Hell. .
I love this story, I can't wait to read the rest!
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