|Reviews for Unexpected Visitors|
| Personnnn chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
You should continue this I liked it!
| RRJToons3 chapter 9 . 12/19/2012
It's hard to read this here because I'm in a risk of just busting out laughing in the mist of dead silence. I'm silly. I can't wait for the next update.
(Nothing else of it to read. So sad...)
| RRJToons3 chapter 8 . 12/19/2012
I think that you have both Soul and Maka right on key. I wouldn't have her act any different.
| RRJToons3 chapter 7 . 12/19/2012
Aw...everything wiil be okay. As is probably should be by now. Since I come here so late.
I want ice cream...
| RRJToons3 chapter 6 . 12/19/2012
Genius! You put Kid in white, the key to his hotness!
| RRJToons3 chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
I only got halfway through this chapter. I was so into the story, I didn't even realize it was almost time to leave Cyber Hell. .
I love this story, I can't wait to read the rest!
| RRJToons3 chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
I feel sorry for the three, just the appearence of the mother can cause so much drama between a great bond.
| RRJToons3 chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
Okay...maybe it wasn't called for, but I couldn't help but laugh whenever I imagined Kid with a bunch of groceries in his hands, all super proud of himself. It's almost sort of a Black Star moment.
| RRJToons3 chapter 2 . 12/17/2012
I'm sorry, I like to review every chapter. It's not an epic fail, but I know what it's like to feel that a chapter isn't it's best. You're going at a nice, steady pace. It's just fine.
| RRJToons3 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
This was an interesting chapter, wasn't a failure at all! I am interested to read the rest.
| Riku Ashwood chapter 9 . 12/13/2012
sheesh it's a bit confusing, but it looks good from what I read. Keep going
| bowserrr88 chapter 8 . 11/28/2012
i LOVE the dude in the van oh my lord hes funny, is he some kind of match maker in his spare time? lol cant wait until the update
| Riku Ashwood chapter 8 . 11/28/2012
well it was an ok chapter
I just don't really understand why this ice cream vendor thing keeps coming up if they werre already planning on heading to a cafe
oh well. Your story, your rules
| Animefreaks48 chapter 8 . 11/28/2012
I actually like the way you dd there so called "date" ...and you are pretty good at being Maka...But your even better at Soul...Hm I'm wondering how you'd be as Black*star xD...I think this story might just start getting EVEN BETTER than I thought ...keep up the good work _
| Animefreaks48 chapter 7 . 11/28/2012
I am honestly in love with the story...the plot is just well thought out...you seem to make this story something EVERYONE should read...keep up the good work and update SOOOOOOON!