Reviews for lily of the valley
urunimi chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Oh my goodness gracious, that was one of the most amazing freeverses I have ever read! Lily... she's always been one of my favorite characters, but this story portrays her in a whole different way. I thought it was really sweet how Snape was really in love with her. Love, love, LOOOOOVE this poem!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
The line in the summary. The what could've been. All my feels. You find a way to say everything.
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
on qn: did you mean for this part to be
"snd FREE and fierce,

snd she's nervous and haunted and"
as in having 'snd' instead of and? or was it a typo..? :/
not well-versed with freeverse hahaha so im not sure

but enjoyed reading, nevertheless!
itsallanoxymoron chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
You beautiful person. You beautiful writer.

You wound my feels.

Keep ritin foreva

Janae
orikami chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Wonderfully angsty. Severus did always only have eyes for Lily Evans.
loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Excellent! :)
mjatwalsh chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
I really like this. It's another take on my favorite ship. But I love it.
stars shine out chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Awww! Positively beautiful, completely magnificent job! I totally adore this!
lunylovegoodlover chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
This was beautiful. I love unrequited Snilly, and have always wondered if there were any way she would have ever chosen him over James. This s one of the few stories that addressed that in a way I liked. And it was sooo beautifully written!
Slytherin Sadist Angel chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
My friends influenced me into shipping Lily/Snape, so naturally, I love this. It's amazing.