Reviews for Death in the Family
chii chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
one thing that catched my eye while reading this was how vividly you described this feeling of desperation that was omnipresent in especially the early days, because well, everything is destroyed, ruined and there is death everywhere.

There is nothing to believe in nor hope for so the protagonist's breakdown is understandable, as well as his refusal to give in to his feelings given the situation, and yet you managed to have something positive in Io. She's a great contrast to everything in this fic, the light in hell kind of.

It's really great that you chose Io, because she's just your average girl and there's nothing special about her. I liked the role she played in this, because it shows that yes, "ordinary"/"simple" actions/things can brighten/make a situation better (if only a little).
hazeltopaz chapter 2 . 5/27/2012
I feel so sorry for the characters you used. I wish you could keep going on your story.

Justine Sapphire