Reviews for Unable to Win
Guest chapter 7 . 7/4/2012
This is CrepuscularSnidget, too lazy to log in cause I have to get off the computer soon. Just wanted to tell you I LOVED the arena and the ending. Great job :)
Guest chapter 7 . 7/3/2012
Omg that was awesome!(: call me crazy but i loved all the blood and fighting and gore (dont worry in not a psycho) haha. But still really good!:D
FiringShootingStar chapter 7 . 7/2/2012
It's cool. I'm suprised Victoria isn't dead. It was great. Glad you wrote it.
HungerGamesHarryPotter7887 chapter 6 . 7/1/2012
This is cool! Please update - I want to find out what happens next. :)
jaydlovesyhew chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I love it!
CrepuscularSnidget chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
I like Victoria. She's a great character, very strong but also flawed in that she doesn't know how to fight the Games. I would add more backstory with the hobo teaching her to fight. That part felt kind of rough.

I like the set up, it's a very original twist. Hopefully, we can see more of Nathan's character.

I can see this is going to be a very interesting story. Well done! :)
Yas chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
Its a great story but you need to add a little more detail and Victoria wouldn't just randomly kiss Nathan i mean se said she would kill him and all... you have to describe how she fell for him but besides that its a really good book