Reviews for His Butler, Dances
Moriko Master of Games chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
You should definitely keep writing yaoi fanfics, you are very good at it.
SnowyFlame chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
So cute and really good!XD
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
awesome
Key-Writes-Shizz chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
I liked this! I have some constructive critisim for you though. Nothing mean! I'm never mean on first timers! Haha. You have a great plot, really smart. I think, though, that you need to slow down a bit, and give more details about what you are typing. Example being the part where Sebastian begins to finger Ciel. From there it just went too fast for me. Some grammar issues as well, but that's easily fixed, yes? :3 I have a suggestion. I would recommend getting a Beta-reader that can over look your work and see grammar problems and help you work through the slow parts. I really enjoyed the story though. And I definitely hope you continue to write. I also had those problems when I started my first fanfic. I promise, you'll get it though. :3 I believe in you! If you have any questions, I really hope you'll consider messaging me. I'll answer any questions you have or reply to whatever you wish to say to me XD. Good luck, writer!