Reviews for The Sum Of All Your Choices |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You could probably explore in making this a multi chapter story. It definitely has potential. Very nice plot and could be even more. Like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad that Edward stood up to his father - and Esme's final words to him were so touching. Great use of the gif - good luck in the contest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was really great. i love how writing on post-its became their thing and how the gif was incorporated :) the flashbacks were my favourite parts. i really enjoyed it GOOD LUCK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww I just want to give a big hug to this edward 333 loved it...amazing. The way you used gif, beautiful. Best of luck :D |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "As certain as I love you." - aw, love that. And great use of the gif! Good luck in the contest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how you used the gif, such a special thing between them. They'll be fine as long as they have each other and maybe papa Cullen will come around before long, too. Good luck in the contest! xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting switch between second and first person; it worked well in conveying the switch between then and now and showcasing the development of the relationship. I liked the use you made of the gif, as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup, they'll have each other. :) Good luck in the contest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best one I've read so far. Crossing my fingers for a multichapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story, I loved reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was absolutely amazing! I loved it. So sweet to have a love like that. You did so great :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() soooo romantical. beautifully written, i love their post-it notes. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |