|Reviews for The Osiris Conspiracy|
| MzMocha chapter 21 . 1/27
There IS a sequel. YES!
This was a serious rollercoaster of a story and I just want to let you know how much I enjoyed the ride :)
| MzMocha chapter 20 . 1/27
Glad that Fitz took the chance to get things straight with Olivia.
Tate's thoughts are chilling. Does this mean there's a sequel floating around somewhere in the Scandalverse? I hope so
| MzMocha chapter 19 . 1/27
Reading this chapter had me holding my breath as I rushed to read and find out what was happening next. The fury Olivia felt towards the assassin who tried to murder the man she loved was very real as was the whole attack on the president.
Your portrayal of Fitz, strong and brave and presidential - unwilling to tend to himself until he's taken care of his country - love to see this side of him! And in the midst of all this chaos, Fitz needs his one minute with Olivia. Yes and yes, they need each other in good times and in bad.
| MzMocha chapter 8 . 1/27
I'm enjoying this story very much. Well crafted and thought out - and jealous Fitz is sexy Fitz, what can I say?
OTOH, you wrote him true to himself; when he realized what he had done, it wasn't triumphant that he felt, but a true regret. That's the heart of the man we know and love.
Holy crap, Olivia walked in just at the wrong/right moment. For all the quietness in it, this was an epic battle, with truth thrown like daggers and both of their hearts left on the ground, bleeding. Oh, my poor Olitz...
"His mood was a sharp knife by a soft throat, dangerous and willing to be tested." Now that right there is a wonderfully crafted line. You definitely have a way with words - off to read and enjoy more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Awesome story ! I enjoyed every moment/detail and would love to see this story played out on the show.
| LenaLove95 chapter 3 . 7/11/2013
Hmm the new guy seems nice enough
| LenaLove95 chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
I'm liking this story so far
| ScotchSista chapter 21 . 6/29/2013
Great story. Loved how you handled the geopolitical aspects. Can't wait to read the sequel.
| starinthem chapter 21 . 12/30/2012
Loved this story. I'm not a fan of other guys in Liv's life but she gets lonely and needs a realistic option so I understand. Hmm wonder what this new problem is. Oh boy and Tate will still up to his old tricks. Glad things ended okay with Fitz physically.
| starinthem chapter 19 . 12/30/2012
Liked the beginning of this chapter. Glad that there were 4 elements that saved Fitz's life. Glad he wanted to make a speech to declare no war, that was the purpose of the assassination attempt, so don't give in. Aww man poor Tom, he's the best.
| starinthem chapter 18 . 12/30/2012
Really good chapter. It seemed very fast paced which was perfect for the chapter because this is a very frantic day. Maybe he had a decoy in the limo, at least that's what I was thinking could be a plan or what I would have set up. I wonder what is going to happen to him now. I wonder if Aban killed himself or someone else got to him.
| starinthem chapter 17 . 12/30/2012
I finally completely understand the whole backstory, why they want the Pres dead and war. Lol at Quinn and Harrison's teamwork by being a call girl. Nice work by Huck and Hannibal. I was surprised that Fitz was able to resist Liv for that long.
| starinthem chapter 7 . 12/30/2012
Hmm it seemed like Fitz knows he has go into hiding, possibly fake a death or kidnapping or something when he was talking to his son. But I wonder why he is feeling this way when Olivia hasn't told him anything yet. Poor Harrison, like that Quinn is taking care of him. Liked Fitz's little rant.
| starinthem chapter 4 . 12/30/2012
I like the switching between the scenes even if it is a one-liner. Tony is quite ballsy.
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/22/2012
I love this chapter so much: this line - "It was a union more sacred than a wedding vow. More intimate than anything he had ever felt or seen. It was more than love making…it felt like a communion with the divine. She tasted of the lake and he never forgot it." You're definitely the best writer on here. The sequel The Ranch has started off so interesting, as well. Can't wait to read more of it.