Reviews for The Blazing Moon
ChipmunksAndChipettesFan chapter 1 . 1/24
Name- Asani
Meaning- Rebellious
Description- Brown small slender but muscular lion cub with red paw print marking(on his head too),red tuff of hair/tail tuff,
Reddish brown eyes,
Tan muzzle/underbelly eyeshades/throat/paws/chest, red-tipped ears, Brown nose, a red scar over his left Eye, a red ‘X’ scar over his right eye,A notch in both his ears, three red claw
Marks on his left shoulder, a red paw On his right shoulder, red hair tuff On both his ears and ankles, red and Brown claws, 3 and black medium whiskers
Personality- Adventurous, brave, fun-loving, headstrong, understanding, heroic, protective, clever, dependable, confident, kind-hearted, competitive, strong-willed, forgiving, selfless, affectionate, arrogant at times, fatherly, short-tempered, insecure, gullible, serious, fierce, protective, funny, kinda evil, playful, intelligent, calm, level-headed, open-minded, cautious, mature, responsible, selfless, caring, astute, loving, sophisticated, strong, and prideful(occasionally)
Good/Evil- neutral
Best friends- none
Enemies- anyone who messes with him
Age- 6-7 months/ 11 years
Other facts (optinal)- has the power to sound like anyone(he's very good at it)
Cubs (optinal)- none
Mate (optinal)- none
History- he's a prince from a different area in Africa, but got separated from his mom and dad when he was a baby. He grew up on his own in the outlands while searching for his parents.
Jestalnaker94000 chapter 5 . 3/8/2016
Here's my lion

Name : Nguvu

Meaning : Strong

Appearance : Huge around 690lbs, 13ft long, 5ft 5in at the shoulder with a 25in tail, muscular and intimidating on sight and approach; his fur is a golden tan with a huge black mane and ocean blue eyes.

Personally : Despite his appearance he's a sweet lion with a kind heart, selfless, straight to the point, level headed, cares for the needs of his family and others above his own and claim in the face of danger.

Good/evil - Good

Mate - Kala ( a large beige colored lioness with amber eyes with a similar personality to him )

Cub - Jojo ( he spitten image of his dad energetic but a lovable and caring cub with a personality like his dad )

History : Nguvu and his family was once part of the black cloud pride but left to find new adventures.
Luna chapter 5 . 7/1/2015
It was a good one
Starfur chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
Nice chapter,Hatari x moonblaze?plz?
TrunksGirl1015 chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
I really like this story so far!
GuardianSaint chapter 7 . 6/11/2013

Age:20(human years)

Discription:A bright golden brown lioness with a chestnut muzzle, throat, belly paws, inner thighs, upper and lower eyeshades. Black tail tuff and grayish blue eyes.

Personality:Funny, loveable, great fighter and hunter. Loves her best friend and mate and will do anything for them.


Cub/Cubs: Kogan

Best Friends:Kendall and Simba

Bad or Good:Good


Age:23(human years)

Discription:Pale golden fur with a pale muzzle, throat, belly, upper eyeshade and paws. Dark brown, almost black mane and tail tuff and dark reddish brown eyes.

Personality:Funny, strong, smart, amazing fighter. He loves his mate and is not to happy that his son's name got another lion's mane in it, especially Kendall's. Logan don't like Kendall cause he think the dark gold lion is after his mate. But in all he loves his son and will do anything to protect his family.

Mate: Sherise



Best Friend:Simba

Bad or Good:Good


Name: Kogan

Age:Cub/6 months

Discription:Pale golden fur with chestnut muzzle, throat, belly, lower eyeshades and paws. Dark brown/almost black mane tuff with dark reddish brown eyes.

Personailty:Funny like his parents, love to have fun and is a quick learner. Kogan is very smart like his father and loves his mother to death. He looks up to his parents and Simba. And he hates Scar and a crush on Kiara.


Bad or Good:Good



Age:22(human years)

Description:Dark golden fur, pale chestnut muzzle, belly, throat, belly, upper and lower eyeshades and paws. Bright red mane and dark green eyes.

Personailty:Flirter, funny, strong and plane out simple don't like Logan. They were best friends till Logan became mates with Sherise, Kendall's cub hood crush and best friend. But he's a kind lion and will do anything for Sherise.


Enemies:Logan and Simba

Bad or Good:Good
Deception is Decepticon chapter 5 . 3/27/2013
Was not Moonblaze a tiger, how did she suddenly transform into a lioness? That is not remotely possibly in real life, and it doesn't make sense. You tried...
Make up your mind and plan the story before you go on ahead to write this. This story did have potentional, it wasn't completely lost into the wide river to typical not thought out stories.
Oh, and for the record, I did review.
Jezebele Destiny White chapter 5 . 11/3/2012
Yeah! Great chapter! The zoo part was a little wierd... especially the albino pather dude. I hope everybody gets out of the zoo. Where's everybody else.

You're eating bakes potatoes, arent't you?
daughterofthering chapter 4 . 8/29/2012
Name- Namarie

Description- Female panther. Pure white and has red eyes. She has strange tattoo like markings on her legs like bracelets.

Personality- Very violent and short tempered and that almost gets her killed all the time!

Age- Same as Moonblaze.

Evil or Good- GOOD but once again- very VIOLENT!

Other facts (optinal)- I would love for this character to die in a vicious fight to save her friends!
DJinTheHOUse chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
kill one of night's cubs and make night sucidell
DJinTheHOUse chapter 3 . 8/20/2012

Description- A pure white wolf with blue eyes (female) or a pure black lion with black eyes. (female)

Personality- very sheltered dont trust verry well untill you get to now her and than you learn she is verrrrry talkative

Age- Pup/Cub

Evil or Good- good

Other facts (optinal)- ran from her family so she didn't have to marry another pack to make peace

Cubs (optinal)-1 girl tiar (tear) 1 boy Gin

Mate (optinal)- Blaze a black wolf/or white lion
Erin Hunteress chapter 4 . 8/19/2012
Once again i enjoyed this chapter and i like im a little confused... Is she a lioness now or still a tiger? Update soon! :)

Also, im guessing that you are eating Hot Dogs. :p
Erin Hunteress chapter 3 . 8/19/2012
Aw! Nala died! And aw! I wanted to submit a tigress. But oh well. Anyway, i liked it and shall read on! :)
Erin Hunteress chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
I enjoy this story. And lol, Simba is jealous. :p
Erin Hunteress chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
I REALLY want to be a lioness (or tigress) in the story but im pretty sure that its too late for that... But if not just PM me! Anyway, this is a great ides for a story and i cant wait to read more. Next chapter! :)
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