|Reviews for Tempo|
| freetobe16 chapter 30 . 8/17
This was amazing! Really nice work.
| Silvanesti chapter 30 . 5/27
I was uncertain if I should read this or not, since good OC characters are interesting but I prefer them in the background. That said, Bea Doe is a very good OC character. I liked the story, read a chapter now and then in-between other stories and books, it was worth reading but not much more. Good language, good plot and all that, but I simply prefer stories that concentrate on the original characters.
| bloodflow chapter 30 . 12/14/2015
| JDMichelle2626 chapter 3 . 4/13/2015
Lol I always enjoy stories that make me laugh
| Moka-girl chapter 8 . 12/6/2014
That last part was funny.
| Moka-girl chapter 6 . 12/6/2014
The whole movie in six chapters. That was fast.
| blackhawk68 chapter 30 . 5/4/2014
Congratulations I literally have tears streaming down my face. This is fantastic and while I hope that there will be a sequel, I don't want you to rush or force it. Generally, nothing is as good as it could be when rushed or forced.
With that said, I'm gonna go peruse your other works.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
I was pretty confused in the beginning...but you brought it along that was pretty cool if I must say so.
| TragicAtBest13 chapter 30 . 11/1/2013
WWWHHHAATTT THERE BETTER BE A DAMN SEQUEL! PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL I BEG THEE! Love this story, by the way, very funny!
| Canisse chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
Meh. Why didn't she try to get Loki killed, or to kill him herself? I'm disappointed. It's not even in character, she threatened to kill him before. And now she doesn't even try.
| Lonely-Bookworm chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
I'm sorry but I don't think I'll be able to review any more :/
| Lonely-Bookworm chapter 3 . 9/14/2013
YAY ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER. YOU GET A KISS FROM ME *3*
Sowwy for the extremely, annoyingly, very short review (_)
| Lonely-Bookworm chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
Yay, another awesome chapter! Awesome chapters are supposed to get awesome reviews, so I'll try my best _
Ducky seems like a really awesome name for Bea. Fits her quite well, I think. Finger painting is a really cool talent! In fact, all sorts of painting/drawing/blargh are cool talents. But I suck at 'em. Oh well...
Oh noes, Bea's getting grey hair! *gasps* WILL SHE DYE HER HAIR? WIIILL SHE? I dunno, but I wanna find out, so byebye!
| Lonely-Bookworm chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Haiii, call me Abby! I review almost everything I read, so...Yeah, on with the review _
Bea Doe is a really likable OC, which is uncommon in these days. All the OCs are Mary Sues, Gary Stus, and other monstrosities.
Tony and Pepper are completely in character, and I have a feeling no one's going to be OOC in this story!
Your writing is really good, and you give a lot of details, which I like. The plot seems good (I'm saying "seems" because I've only read one chapter and don't know what happens next), and I think I'm going to like this story.
Sorry for the crappy review :P Byebye! See ya on the next chappie _
| Elelith chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
Great chapter- I'm just a bit confused why Barton didn't immediately incapacitate her. He is trained for this and he is one of the best...