|Reviews for To Be Kept Waiting|
| Firestar2200 chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
I don't like reviewing lemons, because it makes me feel even pervier, and I'm not a fan of being the first reviewer, either. I feel like I have to set an example for people. But hey, someone has to do it.
I'll start off with the intro. Well, namely, you HAD an intro. Some lemons are: "Hey. Just met 'ya. Let's have sex!" It was also funny once or twice which was nice. You also had proper grammar, which is a feat worth complimenting. People these days...
Sappy endings. I don't know why, but I love them. Maybe because the sappy is cute...? It was a good story. I liked it. From one pervy person to another, I congradulate you. I hope I left a good review XD I know authors dig these things so if I review I make them long. Good story- keep writing. Seriously.