Reviews for Virus in the Machine
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10
Love this! :D Desmond gaining Alex in his head and the virus powers is pretty cool and I love how you've worked it. The Apple being thrilled about the change to Desmond was a fun twist too. Hope you return and continue this sometime!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2017
This is awesome. I like the concept.
Winged Serpent of Light - BOTM chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
Keep me fascinated.
Please keep writing.
TheWritingMustache chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
AHHHH I LOVE IT. You capture everyone so perfectly, and I love the concept, and ahhhhhhhhhh you're lovely and amazing. 333
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
Ok...! I srsly love this! I want more!
Atlantima chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
Excellent read. I really love this.
Sakutara Pheonix chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Can this please continue? This is awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
please write next chapter before i tell Cross where Alex is
Melodien chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
i hope this is not a oneshot, i really want to see more of this, please? :D
Aronim chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Oh, this was brilliant. Not sure if Alex is quite in character, he seems more laid-back and joking than his anti-social, cold, confused self from the game, but I like it and he is close enough at least. Good job.
hieveryone101 chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
This doesn't say "Complete" dose that mean you'll continue the story? Please?
AnnAisu chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Do you know which it really is?
...I have no idea what this second fandom is, but I've seen it crossed with Assassins Creed enough times and I know your writing is of high quality, so I gave this a try...I'm glad I did, even if I missed quite a bit of what happened.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
please update
Xiaron chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
So if we beg do we get another chapter, or has this sadly turned into a one shot? I would love to see where you were thinking of going from here.
Elyis chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Was this a one-shot or are you planning on writing more? (I really hope you choose the latter one)
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