|Reviews for The Keeper|
| MyNameOnAGravestone chapter 12 . 9/16
I just finished this. I love it so much. Please continue and finish this story!
| Krasnyy chapter 12 . 8/25
huehue... i kinda ended up staying up until 5:20AM to finish reading all this- (hello death)
the angst is real, nothing better than your heart being slowly ripped apart.. and this the best i've read so far. it's coming to such a (god, I'm too tired to know the word, like.. ) feelsy part? Idek omg just pls update soon. ill truly die if not.. but don't stress yourself either from being busy, kk? ;n; xxxxx
| lllanimepandalll chapter 12 . 8/1
CONTINUE THIS PLEASE
| Darky303 chapter 11 . 7/4
Are you okay? You said you'd update in May or April but it's been 4 months now. I'm kinda worried.
| JustAGirl chapter 12 . 6/30
Hey, I'd just wanna say that I think Pookiethefrickinbunn from archive of our own stole your story. You published the story in 2012 while she only posted it in 2016. I really, really like your story and hope you continue it :)
| lizzybomb chapter 12 . 6/25
Oh my gosh! This story is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. How is Takano going to react? Will Ritsu get out soon? Is he going to be to far gone to save? How will Ritsu react? Will Ai help them get out? TOO MANY QUESTIONS! Please update soon I can't wait any longer!
| dardar1 chapter 12 . 6/23
Please let Ritsu heal 100% and not fleet an incurable STD
| AngeliqueSora chapter 12 . 6/16
Woah! this is really exciting... im a huge fan of sekaiichi hatsukoi but this is my first time reading a fan fiction abt it and this just blew my mind away... O: honestly I expected yokozawa would beat the shit out of him by being used as a sex toy was just... woah... didn't expect to see that coming... bt takano... what will he do? will he still onodera as he is? :( this is soo heartbreaking... I hope u'll be updating soon! can't wait for the next chapter!
| AppleCiderr chapter 12 . 6/1
Ahh! I need him to save Ritsu!
| unknown chapter 12 . 5/8
What I don't understand and get is that, this prostitute girl/lady could have called the cops in secret, but instead help him recover a bit and decided to teach him the ways of pleasing others. Then make her sound like the victim here when Takano comes to the place wanting to see Ritsu and find a way to escape with him, but couldn't because he is now one just like her; but the prostitute lady didn't want him to be like her, but he already did because she didn't want follow her heart and mind on calling the cops instead did the opposite. Are you going to update or no? because I saw and read these kind of fanfiction story, some of them tends to stray from their original plot story and going on a different direction, and then some of them stay true to original plot story and going the direction from what they have already, which one are you?
| naomizuki chapter 12 . 4/20
Oh boy! Thanks for not abandoning this fic. But the bad news is you're leaving as hanging again.
Thank you for the update.
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/18
HI I read this fanfiction recently and I LOVE IT! it's super interesting, I was really sad when it was left, BUT U CAME BACK! I'm actually really happy XD plz keep writing! And good luck with finals and everything! I'm looking forward to reading more :)
| Zion the Pansexual chapter 12 . 4/18
OH my gosh. I'm legit freaking out. I've been waiting years for this chapter, so I'm freaking out and TAKANO, SAVE RITSU PLZ.
| Silent reader chapter 12 . 4/18
You better update this soon. I love this.
| YukinaShouta chapter 12 . 4/18
O-O THEY DIDN'T SUSPECT A THING! AND THEY SENT AI WITH HIM! WOW, THEY NEED BETTER SECURITY