Reviews for The Keeper
marmar78 chapter 12 . 5/8
This is really good btw
Guest chapter 12 . 5/8
I only just began reading this fanfic... is it going to be updated weekly?
Yaoilover chapter 12 . 12/20/2016
marcelldecrown chapter 12 . 11/28/2016
Guest chapter 12 . 11/10/2016
when the door open.. Takano's eyes widen and very shock! Onodera being tied and bleeding... and unconscious.. Takano rush to him and then get angry... super angry... his Ritsu get hurt and suffering...Then... please continue with your own ideas... I hope it will be more interesting in chapter 13!
Moo2000 chapter 12 . 10/7/2016
MyNameOnAGravestone chapter 12 . 9/16/2016
I just finished this. I love it so much. Please continue and finish this story!
Krasnyy chapter 12 . 8/25/2016
huehue... i kinda ended up staying up until 5:20AM to finish reading all this- (hello death)
the angst is real, nothing better than your heart being slowly ripped apart.. and this the best i've read so far. it's coming to such a (god, I'm too tired to know the word, like.. ) feelsy part? Idek omg just pls update soon. ill truly die if not.. but don't stress yourself either from being busy, kk? ;n; xxxxx
newsyringe chapter 12 . 8/1/2016
Darky303 chapter 11 . 7/4/2016
Are you okay? You said you'd update in May or April but it's been 4 months now. I'm kinda worried.
JustAGirl chapter 12 . 6/30/2016
Hey, I'd just wanna say that I think Pookiethefrickinbunn from archive of our own stole your story. You published the story in 2012 while she only posted it in 2016. I really, really like your story and hope you continue it :)
lizzybomb chapter 12 . 6/25/2016
Oh my gosh! This story is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. How is Takano going to react? Will Ritsu get out soon? Is he going to be to far gone to save? How will Ritsu react? Will Ai help them get out? TOO MANY QUESTIONS! Please update soon I can't wait any longer!
dardar1 chapter 12 . 6/23/2016
Please let Ritsu heal 100% and not fleet an incurable STD
AngeliqueSora chapter 12 . 6/16/2016
Woah! this is really exciting... im a huge fan of sekaiichi hatsukoi but this is my first time reading a fan fiction abt it and this just blew my mind away... O: honestly I expected yokozawa would beat the shit out of him by being used as a sex toy was just... woah... didn't expect to see that coming... bt takano... what will he do? will he still onodera as he is? :( this is soo heartbreaking... I hope u'll be updating soon! can't wait for the next chapter!
AppleCiderr chapter 12 . 6/1/2016
Ahh! I need him to save Ritsu!
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