Reviews for my fragile body
Vampgirl Bitches Biteme chapter 5 . 8/25/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Loved the story !
lionangel1 chapter 5 . 2/23/2013
I like your story...
melissamary55 chapter 5 . 12/31/2012
love the story and cant wait for the nedxt update also will bella tell edward soon that she is sick
P chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
You have way too many spelling mistakes.
It's 'reason' not 'risen' . 'Tried' not 'triad, 'put' not 'pot' and 'spelling' not 'spilling'. Check your work again.
Your tenses are also incorrect at times causing many grammatical errors.
I suggest you find a beta, or take some time to understand the way the English language works.
This will help you in narrating an otherwise brilliant plot.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
where is the next chapter
the excited is really painful
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
its kind of amazing as usual
may of rose chapter 5 . 12/28/2012
plaes, pleas do not kill off Bella. Save her by tune in to a Vampire. Pleas.
Leibeezer chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
I just found this story, and I'm loving it. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
M0hamud chapter 4 . 11/7/2012
Can't wait for the next chapter. Please do hurry, I'm already addicted.
Sarah Miler chapter 4 . 11/4/2012
I loved it and I can't wait to read more!
melissamary55 chapter 4 . 11/2/2012
really good chapter and will edward discover that bella is sick soon i cant wait to read how will she react
Sarah Miler chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
I so love it!
Sarah Miler chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
I really like your story!
govolturialecbella chapter 3 . 9/20/2012
Good so far update soon please
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