Reviews for Between Friends
RaphaelHamato6325 chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
tmnt 204 chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
omg April, never tell Raph that you need a new bra xD he's a gentleman.
Taylor chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
Man, I love this story! So freaking cute! Next time, bite the bullet and let these two get a little more intimate. Why not? Keep writing!
Doctors-Master chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
Awww you should have continued into the dressing room I wanted to know what happened
DifaniSani chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
I feel sooooooooo sorry for Raph! :) Hahaha!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
hahaha...I agree with tmntfan4ever more!
phAnt0mgh0st7018 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
tmntfan4ever chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
casey10rok chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
HAHAHA! XD Aaah, poor Raphael! *wipes tear* :'D
krzykatldy chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Poor Raphie he's scared! Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
I struggled ready this, I laughed WAY to much XD
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Look man, it's really hard to make me laugh, I mean, REALLY hard. But I totally cracked when Raphael found out what the one more thing was...
And you go on with all this nonsense about how you usually don't write humor because your so bad at it...
Wow, of all the inaccurate things I've heard in my life...
Great story, never stop writing these! ;-)
Unknown chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
I find it funny that the whole time I was reading this, thinking, "Poor, poor, Raph..." I was grinning&laughing like an idiot :D I hav2say though, I didn't c the "romance" part of this story. It felt more like friendship or family. One thing I learned, though, the April portrayed here must b immune2embarassment. Nice little story, though!
SleepingSeeker chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Aaiiiee! What a spot to end it, LOL great fun!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
I am in agreement with shotgunredneck, the capability of piping a lung is in the range of possibility.
P.S. If you see anything else that I have rated than you will know that my biggest pet peeve is when someone has a great story and they don't finish. Please. For the Love of comic relief. FINISH! () [the symbol to the left resembles someone laughing till their eyes cross]
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