Reviews for Watching Carter
oaktreeX chapter 1 . 3/1
Very nice!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
very nicely done!
MBooker chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
That made me smile...
lovemboth chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I really liked this. Very creative premise. Thanks for sharing.
farmgirl1964 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
This was really, really cool. Sweet, too. I loved it. I have lived it. Maybe some day I'll get lucky and live it again. Thanks for sharing.
teal-lover chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
i really enjoyed this brief glimpse into their thoughts. i could totally see them doing this, but i would love to see them run off to mexico-if only for a night:)
lionsassy chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Wow. Really nice.
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Aww and people think they have all the time in the world. Loved the story:D
crypticnotions chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story.
BigFan chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
I'm rather impressed with your ability to make the setting come alive in the reader's mind. Your story was quite interesting. I hope you will submit more stories in the future.
homeric chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Very nicely done.
blacktop chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
I liked your concept and the intensity of this story.
stlouiegal chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Just four short minutes, that he has to make seem like an eternity. John can't let go of joss,and she can't either. So they cling to the precious moments that they find, and make the most of them. I really liked your story. The irony of it. John has accepted this is how it's. The things you do when you are in love.
happytoo chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Great story! The four best minutes of their lives. Captivating! Keep writing.
aprilf00l chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Great story!
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