Reviews for Ryūjin of Justice League
Cade2065 chapter 2 . 7/20
Is english not your first language? There were a lot of grammatical errors. The idea is great, but the bad grammar is preventing me from fully enjoying this, please fix.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/6
Your writing SUCKS do it over and do it better
Guest chapter 16 . 6/1
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kuraitja chapter 6 . 5/17
lol, we solved our lawyer problem long ago. that was a good one.
demiread chapter 2 . 3/26
the grammar in this story is so bad i cant read 10 words without seeing a spelling error or a miss-use of a word or even a missing word.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12
YOU SCREWD a good fanfic for not completing IT!
Afrokilla chapter 16 . 2/2
update thisssssss
monsterkillers124 chapter 2 . 1/11
Lots of spellinggrammar errors
monsterkillers124 chapter 16 . 1/11
still spelling and grammar errors please fix every chapters errors please I don't mean to sound rude also it is a great story
monsterkillers124 chapter 2 . 1/11
Lots of spellinggrammar errors
monsterkillers124 chapter 16 . 1/11
still spelling and grammar errors please fix every chapters errors please I don't mean to sound rude also it is a great story
senpai16 chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
Your grammar sucks, good story anyway
DecPulse chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
YOUR GRAMMAR IS THAT OF A CHILD. PATHETIC FOR AN ADULT SUCH AS YOURSELF.
MGStarFire chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
it's a cool idea for a story and i enjoyed the first chapter but there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes i hope you fixed that in later chapters
tanithlipsky chapter 16 . 11/4/2016
cool
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