Reviews for Ryūjin of Justice League
JesterDGrowlithe chapter 2 . 7/25
The story is good but you seriously need a beta, your writing is terrible and I can't read the story because of that...
SageModeSasuke chapter 16 . 7/8
Great story. Grammar got a bit better. Keep practicing. Anyway, thanks for your hard work!
SageModeSasuke chapter 11 . 7/7
Holy mother of heck!
SageModeSasuke chapter 4 . 7/7
Grammar got a bit better this chapter. Great storytelling though.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/2
Ooooooh that explains it
Guest chapter 11 . 7/2
Say whaaaaaaaaat! I thought that he absorbed those two!... talk about a plot twist!
helkil chapter 1 . 6/14
I had tow shut off my brain just two get through the first chapter
MrLavides chapter 4 . 6/8
yeah i can't continue with the story because it has SOOOO much grammar issues every other sentences are missing words so it doesn't sense.
MrLavides chapter 3 . 6/8
It's a good story but you need to fix your grammar, i can barely understand your story with so many grammar issues. There are words missing in a lot of the sentences.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/29
The story is good but your grammar just makes we want to cry
suz chapter 1 . 4/28
Please get i beta the gramma just in the first paragraph is confusing
Primeval Of The Darkness chapter 1 . 3/31
Wut da fuk dood.

I have no words.

1/10 IGN-Would not fap again.
Shadowdragondanny chapter 16 . 3/10
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Guest chapter 16 . 2/16
supert
Ghmsdca chapter 1 . 2/15
Dude, I love all your stories, but PLEASE, check your spelling and grammar!
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