|Reviews for Born This Way|
| xcherriblossom chapter 30 . 1/20
I love this fanfiction so much - I love the way you connect all the characters and make the story always fun to read; I especially love trans!naruto/sasuke fanfictions, and there seems to be a lack of them, honestly. I also love the way you portray the characters, especially Kiba's! Poor Kiba, he deserves some love, and happiness. He's such a good character in this fic ;w;
Haha, Kiba's voicemail, classic!
I really hope that you haven't dropped this fic, not that I want you to rush or anything, of course, but I just hoped that you haven't!
| The Naruto King chapter 12 . 12/26/2014
Jesus christ i actually ripped out some of my jair reading grandma mito, ON CHRISTMAS. Jesus your great at doing these fanfics
| JustAAvidReader chapter 30 . 12/18/2014
Wow, you write beautifully. I actually read all 30 chapters in 2 days. I didn't comment before because I couldn't stop reading to write a review. It's so interesting, and the myriad of characters are written so beautifully and catching and I can't wait to read what else you've got planned for it.
It's an amazing story and I really like the problems and situations you've made/used.
| lagseeing1123 chapter 14 . 12/15/2014
At first I was reluctant in giving this a chance. I've not read trans stories yet but now that I have, I can now start to understand them. This is a very good eye opener. I may be gay but I never wanted to be the other gender. And now I know that it is even harder for them.
Just like how even though Naruto is now a boy, his orientation leans towards the boys. And how hard must that be that he had to pretend being a girl, which he didn't want, just so he could be with that Jon Soto.
I commend you for writing this.
But I was just wondering whether this will be yaoi or not. Or if Kiba is gay for liking Naruto.
| Please send me messages chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
| Guest chapter 30 . 10/5/2014
Wow, this is great. I like that this story feels like reality and the emotions of the characters practically become your own. Many people tend to forget, that uncertainty, emptyness and helplessness are a part of life as well as happyness. Or they tend to over dramatize it and it feels like a soap. To find an author that is able to create a balance between these things is rare (at least for me).
The change of POV's is interesting because even the feelings of people who I would normally see as antagonists now make sense to me. There don't even seem to be any antagonists, no real black and white - I think that is what partly makes the story feel so real to me.
I don't know if this is appropriate to write in a review, but there is something personal I'd like to add. I myself am a female to male transgender and it's great to read a story where we are not portrayed as freaks or a fetish. I am not able to know what your exact opinion on this topic is or if you know someone who is a trans* person, but I think you grasped the feeling of being one really well. There are a few little "faults" in there, like the fact, that Narutos voice is manly although he isn't on testosterone yet, but it isn't like that would be impossible in real life.
The topic of love that isn't focussed on gender is also one of the points I like in this story. I don't want to make this political in any way, so I'm just gonna say that maybe stories like this will lead to understanding and that is the first step to acceptance.
So yeah, all I wanted to say was that I really appreciate your story. And please excuse my grammar, this is not my native language.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
| Anonymous chapter 30 . 8/27/2014
Wonderful. I'd hate being their guidance counsellor (snickers). That'd be a nightmare. But, seriously, are you going to add Kakashi in soon? I could definitely use it...
| bubblegumpandabear chapter 30 . 8/27/2014
Wow, I really love this story! It's different, and that's nice. It's not the typical Naruto high school fanfic. I like how it deals with different problems many people go through, and how those problems effect the people around them. It seems like it's been quite a while since you've last updated, so I don't know if you've stopped writing, but either way I want you to know this was very well written and that I would definitely post a review if you were to update it. I was supposed to be doing school work today, but I wanted to know what happened so badly that I just had to read it. Anyway, nice job! Now I am off to check out your other fanfics. Hope you continue this, if possible! :)
| Anonymous chapter 29 . 8/27/2014
Yep. Agree with that other review I saw. Shika's an ass!
And you didn't update for6 months?!.. Well, maybe this story ISN'T abandoned. Just. .. A hiatus. Yeah! A long, indefinite hiatus.
Loving the stuff you put in with Jon! He's a nice guy... And maybe Sakura will get with hi.. I, for one wouldn't be opposed!
| Anonymous chapter 28 . 8/27/2014
... What did ya do, Sakura? I mean, I really can't blame you, but damn... Maybe this isn't what I think it is?
Still! Even if it is, sympathizing with you is to easy...
| Anonymous chapter 27 . 8/27/2014
We'll, see ya!
And sorry for the double-review thing!
Did NOT mean to press the update button that soon!
Oh, and, just in case you're wondering (which I highly doubt you are), I stayed up until 2:40 last night reading. Which gave me a grand total of 2 hours and 45 minutes of sleep!..
And, so, I feel like- well, you should know! Unless you're one of those rare people who have never gone without sleep in their life...
Yeah, you know!
| Anonymous chapter 27 . 8/27/2014
You gonna include that Kiba confession soon? It's a little sad how that's going for him...
Granted, nothing's beating Itachi in the angst area. Poor gakki... Dying sucks.
Sasukewill have it jard when he finds out, too. I, personally, am hoping he'll run of to Kakashi for help wi
| Anonymous chapter 4 . 8/26/2014
So... After looking at your bio page. .. You ARE a fan of KakaSaku! 'Squeals excitedly' I knew I liked this for a reason!
Granted, I doubt that's what's going to happen here, what with Iruka, but the good-will shows in your writing. And it's almost 12... a.m...
How does time move so fast?!
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 8/26/2014
Ohhh! A realistic-y high-school fic! My favourite!...
Well, kind of. Considering that my favourite pairing is kind of illegal here (you don't have it), I guess that's not really the case... Because, apparently, dating your teacher, is oh so bad. Which, after actually LOOKING at my own?.
Yeah, I get that.
But this is fanfiction, and you said it yourself! Kakashi's hot. So is KakaSaku really that horrible a pairing?
I really love what you're doing here with are favourite little trio's issues! Who also will someday convince the world that the Golden Trio is horrible compared to them. But that's a story for another time. :3D! Sakura's, especially. She's always been the most relatable of thhe group, and I liked how you showed that here as well. Of course, that could just be me, being well-learned in the fields of low-self esteem... Yeah...Yea for me?
Well, moving on!
Great job with Sasuke's teme-ness, expanding along the popular line of thought that Itachi laid out in the anime. The thought about how Sasuke hates him because their parents never sees anyone but their genius.
Then, finally, Naruto! Love the inclusion of 'sexy no jutsu' you made. Then the subsequent gayness area along with Kiba...
And if I spent even half the amount of time on homework as I do on reviewing, I think I'd be set for the year...
And thanks for writing!
| peeceeguy00 chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
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