Reviews for Battiro's Sorrow
Mexicayotl chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
That's so sad :( I love all the emotion in it.
ShadeLivesForever chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
This is interesting, but I am slightly confused as to what this is. You state in the description that this is a poem. Is this one poem that you have typed or are these three separate poems?

Secondly, I cannot identify what types of poems these are. I do not find a constant syllable pattern nor do i see any rhymes.

Also, some of the sentences can improve in terms of grammar. I find your spelling pleasing though. Good luck with your future writing projects!