|Reviews for Danny Phantom A tick in time|
| Oak Leaf Ninja chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Heya! Welcome to ff! A few pointers:
would NEVER reveal his secret right on the spot to some random chick.
paragraphs. They help.
3.I sense a Mary Sue...
But minus a few other things, GREAT JOB FOR YOUR FIRST STORY! It takes a lot of guts to post things on FF! Hope to see more from ya soon!
| c3llar door chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Meh, Danny would never go up to some random girl and go. "Oh BTW, I'm Danny Phantom"