|Reviews for April Showers and Adult Children|
| Cori Rain chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I'm surprised I do see more reviews in this.
It is an interesting idea, the nations having normal Human children. I actually would like to see more and I'm sort of sad you just left it there.
You did alright for Samuel and with his family nor wanting him to speak much it was harder. I was actually waiting for him to ask Al and Arthur if he ever had siblings...
My only advice for your writing is to put a little more emotion into it. By the topic I thought I would be in tears and I'm not.
Otherwise keep on writing. :)