Reviews for Broken Wings
Guest chapter 11 . 3/24/2015
On the whole it was very good n very well
written plot..
Guest chapter 6 . 3/24/2015
Nice twist with the Charlie abusing but maybe it would have been better if you had just stuck to SM's original story because-it's just my opinion- but it kind of looks a little bit rushed, also like in the book I don't think Edward would have heard Bella's voice
Guest chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
I'm assuming that someone grabbed Bella's Passport before they left.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Thank yiu for not demanding a review. So Charlie started drinking. Great timing there, Charlie!
singingcaro chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Hi! I'm sorry to tell you this but someone has stolen your story! It's the same, only shorter, I believe! The story is called "love always wins" and it's written by mikaylabauer. If I'm not right and this story is approved by you, I'm sorry for disturbing you. Otherwise, this story is really great, thank you for writing it! )
7HockeyStarVampireObsessed7 chapter 11 . 10/17/2012
nice story
Family Fude chapter 11 . 9/2/2012
Wow... You...How...Nice story...
twivampsalvatore chapter 11 . 8/10/2012
Great story :)
Blueruby13 chapter 11 . 6/27/2012
Wow I can't believe Charlie would abuse her. That's horrible!
ScarletWraith chapter 11 . 6/10/2012
Loved it! Short, wanted more but I get the whole needing to finish it. Some stories don't. Red sequels or to be longer. You finished it on a good note. Good job & I look forward to reading more of your work. :)
Vamps09 chapter 9 . 6/8/2012
Oh boy she is gonna get it.
CupCakeClaudis chapter 11 . 6/4/2012
I really liked your story :) I wish it was longer but I like the way you ended it! I can't wait to read your other stories! :D
edwards-girl-4-ever chapter 11 . 6/4/2012
good ending.
harleymaria chapter 10 . 6/4/2012
Aww edward saved her lovr it
vmpgrl41 chapter 10 . 6/3/2012
Good chapter, love the writing, keep up the awesome work
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