|Reviews for Fall of a Hero|
| Hawk man 23 chapter 1 . 1/2
Well I got to say I loved it! I love Marco he was probably my favorite character! I have red all. Your story's! I wasn't the biggest fan on the crystal journey... But seeing Marco back brought joy! I wish you could write another story with Marco returning! And maybe get rid if the ponnies ! But hey keep it up! I'll keep reading them
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
ROSE! NOOO! Marco is the blue robed figure I take it, yes? How could he do that to just a little chick. I am tempted to kill him myself!
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 8 . 8/20/2013
Blu hurt Jewel?! Nooooooo. He would never go that, would he? He's too clumsy to do something like that.
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
Cute chapter for Blu and Jewel reading their vows for each other. :D And who was this blue robed creature. Is he another member of the dark robe saga? O_O
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
The ghost of Amber appears! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh-oh wait, she's a good guy now, well girl, well, girl-ghost. :D
It's almost 1:30 AM where I am so I'm gonna go to sleep. I'm gonna go to sleep now. Bye-bye!
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 5 . 7/3/2013
This was a great chapter. The part in the middle of the chapter, I assume he is the main villain in this story.
| DEVON.L chapter 29 . 6/16/2013
( THEY LEFT US NOTHING... NOTHING. WHY DO WE HALF TO RIGHT THERE RONGS... SOMETIMES ONE MUST BE SACRIFICED... FOR THE GOOD OF MANY) WHAT IV LEARNED IS THAT ( YOU ONLY HAVE ONE LIFE SO LIVE IT) I HOPE PEOPLE FIND PEACE AND LOVE AND HAPPIENESS CUZ I ALMOST HAVE. GOODBYE:)
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 4 . 5/19/2013
Hey, I heard that song in game. Sonic Heroes I think. Good chapter though. I'm tired and I'm gonna go to sleep but I will read the rest later.
Bye for now.
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 3 . 5/19/2013
So the Ghost of Amber has returned once again. Man, she really doesn't wanna leave Jewel alone.
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Oh, Blu how could you forget your wife's anniversary? Well, he better pray Rose, Kinski, and Buster make everything perfect for them.
Good chapter though.
| MCGamemaster90 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I like this chapter. It was good for a beginning. I loved the part when Blu took Rose to where the flowers were and gave her one.
So they have a baby girl named Jade? So cute. And it's their anniversary too. Wow, that's a lot of a prologue.
Well, I look forward to reading the rest later.
| DarkDelta09 chapter 29 . 2/11/2013
Amber did the right thing,she gaved her spirit to blu so jewel can live with blu forever...Rest in Peace
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/28/2012
Wow that last part sounded like Star Wars revenge of the sith palpatines sppeach i love it tour story is original
| tjamesbeard chapter 32 . 8/7/2012
This story, was pure amazing in my mind. I know what I like and this is definitely near te top of the charts. I wasn't sure at first how this would play out, but it did in the most amazing way.
I'm gonna go read the next part now, keep up the good work.
| Xephos yogcast chapter 14 . 7/23/2012
Another great chapter