Reviews for Jasmine Potter and the Gundam Prince: Book 1
Lover of Emotions chapter 6 . 10/1/2017
that is good. update soon please.
Cristyprime1 chapter 6 . 4/30/2016
Its pasilmouth
Yaoi Girl 8934 chapter 6 . 10/28/2015
I love it u really should continue it soon
god of all chapter 6 . 1/2/2015
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon...
Pixiecropse chapter 6 . 10/14/2013
I love it please update soon or else I will haunt you and we wouldn't want that now would we
DaughterofDante chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
continue please!
CoO chapter 6 . 8/27/2013
Please post!
Orangepaint chapter 6 . 7/2/2013
Keep up the good work! I love watching people put their own flair and such into the plot line of reading the books, great job, and thank you for posting,
Beth5572 chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Tempt Me More chapter 3 . 4/22/2013
I was going to read this even though the summary, femharry's unneeded name change which happens to match your screen names that screams self insert and mary sue but the first chapter did me in. Switching from 3rd to1st pov is horrible, confusing, unneeded, and just wrong. Stick with 1 pov and make femharry's name match her male counterpart's and this could be a decent story
Reishin Amara chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
not bad at all...
Vangran chapter 6 . 4/1/2013
I am glad for the update, but now I want more! Update when you can!
karone-sakura chapter 6 . 3/25/2013
This chapter was better. There weren't as many mistakes. Are you going to do this for all seven books? There has got to be a better way then pretty much rewriting the books but adding your own flair. You could do anything you want with these stories and yet you decide to pretty much rip off the books? At this point its going to take forever to great through it all. I thought this story had promise when I first started reading. I still see a small glimmer of promise but if this story continues down this path then I don't think I'll be following this much longer. I'm sorry. I don't mean to be blunt or cruel or anything. Good luck.

Pikachu79 chapter 6 . 3/24/2013
This is another great chapter, keep up the great job.
Pikachu79 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
This is my second time reading this story from the beginning, and this is one the funniest chapter that I have read:)
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