|Reviews for Finding Home|
| Apollodorus13 chapter 12 . 10/10
Its sad that no one there will really appreciate the ammount of power Harry has to have used there to slow down two Infiniti stones especially when Space was one of them.
| Apollodorus13 chapter 5 . 10/10
Your idea of making him the literal Master of Death but then not using the cloak effectively makes no sense to me. Its supposed to be cut directly from Deaths clothes. It should hide him from literally everything. Odin and Thanos with all the infinity stones shouldnt be able to sense him if hes under it even if he wS right next to them
| fallenangel8635 chapter 15 . 10/9
Good read thank you
| CharmedArtist chapter 1 . 9/6
Great start! I‘m already loving the way you write characters judging by West.
| Balmonec chapter 15 . 8/29
I definitely enjoyed this, and I would eagerly read the sequel if you ever got around to writing it.
| Nicthalon chapter 14 . 7/11
Shawarma actually looks like it would be delicious. And it's usually chicken.
| Shiaira73 chapter 15 . 6/17
Great story! I see the sequel hasn't been started yet. such a shame. I seriously enjoyed reading this. To be fair, I have to say, writing such a story and leaving it for years dangling on a cliff is just... cruel, to us, the readers. Anyways, I enjoyed the read and will keep an eye out for a sequel to hopefully appear. Thank you for taking the time to write and share your stories. It is appreciated.
| Alwin-nl chapter 14 . 6/10
Looks like writer really doesn't like Shoarma (not 'swaharma') - or the only kind they have ever eaten is the salty, greasy, nasty "american" version (which is, to be rather frankly, just as disgusting as every kind of food there)
The description at the top was correct - it's grilled on the steak. But that also means it's not fat, at all. During the grilling any fat in the meat drips down and doesn't stay in the meat. Also, Shoarma is usually chicken or turkey, not exactly the fattest meats on the market.
I really wonder why this is described in so much detail.
Anyway, the rest is interesting enough that I'm still here 14 chapters in.
| Alwin-nl chapter 4 . 6/7
Yea, fly after the plane instead of just, you know, walk into it while invisible.. Wizards.. *eye roll*
| Raiderhater13 chapter 15 . 5/12
I like what I've read so far
| lkdaswani chapter 15 . 5/8
Sorry for cursing, dear Author, but your story deserved superlative praise and this was the only way I could have managed it.
No, really. Most of the Harry/Avengers fics I have read feel...forced. Unreal. Overpowerful. But yours...yours flows so smoothly that I could imagine all of it happening in my mind.
Brilliant writing, brilliant building. Excellent. Thank you for sharing it. I am now going to go and see if there is a sequel- God I HOPE!
| 77766777 chapter 14 . 3/19
I don't know what kind of shawarma you've had, but it's normally far better than whatever this abomination is.
| Aedwards179 chapter 2 . 3/19
Completely silent cars are dangerous. and who the hell would want to silence an Audi R8
| Kage Hakari chapter 14 . 3/13
I'm a little offended on behalf of the shawarma. You must of not had a good experience with it.
that aside, I LOVE your story! this is me actually rereading
| 2000STR chapter 5 . 1/22
ch 1~5 harry is living like an apendage